Wow now that I know that is is stolen I will read it on another site. How pathetic to steal someone's work................................................
MC gets an op absorbing ability, only absorbs like 2 things. Constantly loses until he comes back, loses again, then comes back and plot armor kicks in. Disappointing.
So scenes this book is basically done because it just stopped out of nowhere I hope the author can tell me if u took taking this book from somewhere else can u let me know please so I can find it and if it is an original Story and it is completed, and you just don't have the time to upload the pages on the app then is there any way u can sent me everything that is already done so I can read it please!!!!????? I really love this book and dont want to see it stop and I would like to see it finish to the end!! So at least let me know whats going and whats up with the book please!!
Author is really a vast treasure of creativity. I was about to head to the next chapter when it was already finished. Author, waiting for more, PLEASE! Don't stop!
Hey guys author here. I love martial arts fantasy a war fantasy, but i thought about bringing something new to the mix. Hope u enjoy my work. Criticism and comments are always welcome. I have other works online such as Titan's Throne and Solitary Sword Sovereign each with millions of views so check em out :)
One of the best original novels on this site... even though there are thing that I like and diskile in this novel, overall, is a good read to me. (SPOILER ALERT)What I like:- very good pacing- very good grammar- smart and calculative mc- ruthless mc- hardworking mc- solus (really usefull companion/ai/equipment)- nana (his 'magic mentor' i really enjoy the interations with the old perky magician lol)- character grow (we can see how the characters grow along with the progress of the novel, even though its more mc focused, but i dont have any problems with that)What I dislike:- the nobles/young masters trope- his older brother, that seems going to be an annoying factor through the novel, or at least will come back and bite him in the a*s...- the 'hidding true strength and look like a scrub' trope... ( well i can understand the hiddind strength part since its logical when you are at the bottom, but so far we have a somewhat ugly mc, i mean every one in his family is somewhat decent and only him and his father seem to be the ugly ones...)(note: he seems to get better looking with each increase of his magic core, but it seems that at best he will be average, which i will be ok with, as long as he doesn't remain ugly lol)Even though the beginning of the novel may seem slow, or somewhat confusing, it works as an introduction to the mc personality, and help us understand him better, so I suggest that u should read at least 10 chaps before diciding if u like it or not, thats what I always do.
It's a good novel grammatically, with decent world building and characters. One major problem. Everything. Takes. So. Damn. Long. End a chapter on a cliffhanger and then spend the next 20 chapters on a side character. Story arcs that go for way too long. He'll craft an item and then 10 chapters later you'll see the stats for it. He sets something up, the system will say: done in 24 hours. At the end of the 24 hours it turns out it wasn't enough time and will need 30 days. And at the end of the 30 days? Wasn't enough time, now the time is: UNKNOWN. Wtf. At the end of a chapter he'll open up a treasure chest and gasp, oh my hod, it's a...... And the chapter will end, and 30 chaogerd later the item he gets will come up with what it is.
Deploying the troops to get that hot man Michael
Good chapter (cp 43) and can’t wait for more ...️ I only wish that it would get updated a little more often…:)
Best novel so far! 10/10 as for me.
I’m hooked! Unique and tragic view of the fated mate bond, this story has already made me rage, cry, and binge-read! Thank you, Author!!
I love this story!!!