I think this novel is a wasted opportunity, don't get me wrong, as a slice of life/comedy/parody this novel is overall ok, but the rest is a mess. First of all the author is too fixated with minecraft (clearly he is a fan), so much that this novel could be renamed "minecraft simulation"; the system is also reduced to a minecraft shop and it's a pity because the author could have literally put lots of funny crossover between games, other novels, films, mangas ecc. but he decided to use the most bland, and in my opinion boring, game ever as the core of the novel, god there are chapters full of minecraft mod explanations....I don't want to criticize the grammar because the author does a good job as a non native speaker. The MC...what can i say, the typical dull one always present in this type of novels, which is not bad, but i think you can create funny moments even without a dumb protagonist, but this is my humble opinion.The only advice i could give to the author: try to variegate your contents, use the potential of the shop which is the best point of the novel.
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So basically it is what the sypnosis says.the mc and the fmc swaps body every three days.thats about it.though there is not much world background as the first 60 chapters resolves around the body swap like what they do and how.overall, its an unique plot I guess.Translation is 5 starsstory development is 4 starsCharacter design is 5 starsupdating stability as always 5 starsworld background is 3 stars.overall 4.4 stars
OMG I don’t know what country you are coming from but I didn’t start reading this because the grammar is soooooooooooo so so so soooo bad just in the introduction alone if your not from a English based nation write it in your own language then google translate it or something if you are then please go back to the third grade I’m sorry I don’t want to be mean and it actually sounded fairly decent from the introduction but if you write a book the very first requirement is to have a decent grammar in any language other wise it ruins the story and turns it into home work of some kind just trying to understand and in my honest opinion you need to get better and grammar or get a editor so people will not need to burn their brains out thinking about what your writing.
I love the story so far I wonder if in the future his crimson eyes will always be red or it's like he has to be in an enlightened state of mind.
Hi, author the synopsis is quite good and makes you interested in the story. I'm looking forward to the story and its character development. I would love to dive into the misery. All the best...
AAAAAaaaaaaAaaaaaAaaaaaaa worth it at satisfied ako sa paghihintay kahit natulugan ko siya finally may chapter 6 na din! Mass release! Mass release! Mass release!
So far so good. Author if you didn't let the readers know, I really wouldn't have known that this is your first time writing in english. Though there are little mistakes, but as a author myself I know that those mistakes can slip by without you knowing. So over all good job. As for the storyline, I'm not one to read war&military fiction much, but I really enjoy that your novel is an easy read. Just wish you make the chapters a little longer. Keep up the good work, look forward to what happens to Madd(MC).
I don't believe this story isn't more well known, it is such a great read, and has a great development, one of the best I've ever found on this app
Honestly I'm not good with reviews so I'm just going to say this the fights are good I like where the story seems to be going I love the humor . . . . .and I think I might just be in love
I see your inspiration, your aspiration. Go forth fellow Shameless Author, with these five stars, create something magnificent. I can't wait to watch all of Jack Graham's One Sided Murder Scenes and Romance. The MC seems to have this Cold, but Quirky side to him. He likes teasing, making fun of people either straight out, but also subtly. Especially that little arrogant brat of an Elf and her fun-sized superiority.
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