I really do like the worldbuilding and setting that works behind this novel, it is really interesting to see an enemies to lovers. Plus now there's a sci fi twist to it? Take my money. The chapters were a bit short ish for me, but I think that's normal? I haven't read anything on WN for a while now.Good luck for spirity!!
Pretty good so far writing wise, I know this writer is working on multiple novels as well so keep up the good work with the both of them. Same last name as a certain someone as well, curious how it will tie later on..
Great story so far. Loving the pace and the academy arc so far. The fights are well written and from the very beginning, I was very Invested in the Ethereal seed. Can't wait to see how our boy grows and the fights to come. Overall is a good read and I would recommend it to anyone who likes well-written fantasy. It is still early chapters so the world building is there and I'm sure we will understand more about the world as the story goes on. More chapters please.
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This has became my most favorite novel.I would like the author to continue this forever.....please people keep donating power stones to this. together we will make this the top ranked book.??????#best girl in nyla
i can't talk about writing quality since i'm not good with that myselfsince some chaps are locked i won't talk about stabilitystory: mc has too clear memory of things, most people will have at most hazy memory of things they've did in the past if they didn't repeat that thing memories much. Mc also for some fuckin reson just jumps into bed of women, stress can make someone less rational but for **** sake mc is going for sage look but he doesn't care about stdscharacters are lifelikeworld background aside from being a little unrealistic it's okay
Already read till chap 500+. Overall it's a great story, but it can be draggy sometimes, hopefully I can read it in proper English when it get translated.
Love this story, sit on the edge of my seat waiting on new chapters. How long until he finds her again? What is on the paper that she is upset about?
There is a lot of potential in this story. Its story development is fast and purposeful. Each development really hits home with such a emotional subject matter, and it did honestly hook me in.I would like the author to just take their time abit more. Slow it down and include more detail. The first 'date' of the two characters could of had a bit more time and detail put into it as an example. Great story, great development. Just needs a bit more time put into certain areas and this could be an amazing piece of work.
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