writerprimordial
Ch. 105,Eh? There's a talentNot too bad...Then let me seriously wish upon you a quick and painless death, and a great career ahead of you in the netherworld!
Ah...
as i see it, the FL loves conflicts with the unreasonables. why not just cut all ties with the family or just ignore them? she already had a firm standing yet she chose to play and then complain for her being tired of conflict. they have already abandond you because of the maternal family's misfortune. Why did you you go back and prolong your sufferings.. a martyr? nah, haha an idiot i think. this can't go on.. been affected by the plot, some readers might become martyrs too letting their family take advantage of their fortune but not care of the person(high)..i'm only saying it but there maybe not.. and i prefer being mysterious too, to protect oneself...but this is just a fantacy anyway so i don't have a problem with it just stating opinions...
(Read till ch 70)
Firstly this story has excellent translation quality with nice depiction of scenes without any annoying errors unlike many translations out there.
Now coming to story, personally I have really enjoyed some of cases fought on mc's personal ability and little help from mystical ability from transmigration.
Although there are some plot holes in the character development of mc considering his past especially his habit of hitting many of beautiful women except that story is quite nice.
I especially loved all the chapters of cases fought even though they had some of stupid moments from opposition of underestimating mc or belittling him with speech and then routine face slapping but overall cases were decent enough.
Due to its shortcomings but still overall nice story, excellent translation quality and regular update schedule till now(100+ chs), this deserves a solid 4.5 stars
so far so good keep it up can't wait to read more waiting for the next chapters
Hello author I wanted to know if there is seggs in this novel?
Continue.
There is over 700 chapters now for this Series
This story has me totally invested, I really like the portrayal of mental illnesses, the background is really great, and even if the MC doesn’t really talk, you can still understand him and I think that is really great. The only mistakes I have noticed is just a few words one word before/after where they should be, and one where the wrong form of word was used, overall this story is really great and has good potential!
I will rate this 5 stars because I like NTR .This is one of the best NTR novel out there, the s*x scene is very good detailed.
Here's my review about this novel (chapter 1 to 18):
First, The MC did not transmigrate from nowhere nor reincarnation of someone. So it's normal if the MC is childish or a bit immature from the start but I think it will get better.
Second, MC family consist of 4 people including him of course, his mother, father and I think a ten year old brother. But they literally ignore MC's existence due to his bloodline is lower than F rank while his brother has an A rank bloodline so the MC's parents dotes on his younger brother so much.
Third, the world background is easy to understand and there's no war happening between the two kind of races; human & skarlovs and mixed bloods from the time being or in the surface pft. But discrimination about race and bloodline are common thing and too strong even ignoring their child just because of a very low bloodline.
Fourth, MC's system is a bit strict or not just a bit lol. It have a daily, weekly, monthly and yearly quest but the reward is also reasonable. There are 7 attributes that are strength, speed, agility, perception, bravery, charm, intelligence.
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I almost give up this novel because of the paragraph of Gustav in the first chapter. I am almost a sinner, author please forgive me. Your novel is so satisfying, can't wait for your update.
Sigh, it's my first time to write too many words. So please, support the novel for many chapters. I want to read it so bad.
To be honest, when I first read the name, I though it would be regular novel with apocalyptic theme, but your first chapter surprised. I really like this novel, and I'll continue to read it! Keep it up!
