I really like the start and progress of the story. There is an actual plot and end goal for the mc. Thank god it's not a 'chasing skirts' kind of mc, he doesn't think with his dick or try to bang the first woman he met. I also really like the brother hood between Mc and his friend.
Awesome cant wait for more chapters to come. The main character is strong will i cant wait for her to grow. She will be the strongest when her power grow im get excited cant wait.
The writing style is excellent, it's very clear. It's development is very good. I like the characters, I think that they are very interesting and am excited to see where the story goes.
It's would be a good novel, if not for Mary Sue-like Main Heroine. Even right now, I can hardly think of a more hateful person than of her. It would be so much better, if just she died after first mention about her.I just f***** hate her. (I know it's all subjective and s***, but go to hell "writer".)P.S.It's really dumb practice to attribute the merits of translators to a novel. Most of the time, it not deserve it.
Fck all the ****ty novels in trial and getting rid of all the good ones.This one is good tho.Djndbdjdjdjdndndndndnmdmdmdmdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkd
To be fair I understand that enumerating in value helps in understanding and saves effort in the narrative, but let's review: the writer puts the MC at the point of invading the dreams of others. And the best he can create on top of that are points to buy items? There is a whole mystical world to explore. Or you can go to science fiction and develop a dream comparison and use that to create marketing. Or something new: the MC can simply help other people for free, after all there are people, volunteers for a better world or start helping the family and then interact with more people with other problems. Sometimes these texts are so generic and seem like a forced catharsis. There are people in the world besides the MC and it should be the author's job to develop that. Well, if the MC suffers from cold, hunger or violence, is it because other thousands or millions suffer the same and what is the answer to improve that? Hit someone arrogant and run away.
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If you like Legendary Bosss, Legendary Mechanic and the system genre. You'll surely like this one.The plot is unique for me so far. Using a game to combat alien invasion.I don't care if you read it. I just want this novel to be chosen and go past chapter 60. I want to read more.
I liked Luke's character . Reminds us of a bit of all of us during this pandemic time. Helpless , down on luck ...but fighting it out using his wits ..
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Haven't read it yet but aint the dude on the cover the same guy on the cover of Another World's Versatile Crafting Master. The background is different and they are facing different directions but i swear they're the same dude
Grammar is good but some math error and word error. Good premise. I don't know if there are novels like this but I'm loving it. I stopped reading Game genre but this one is solid