Ouch my eyes. The plot itself is barely followable and is just a mashup of tropes, while the writing itself is nigh incomprehensible due to the lack of grammar and structure. I can easily get the gist of what is going on due to the 1-D nature of the characters, but that doesn't forgive any of the egregious flaws.
Oh god how long do I have 2 wait for the next chapter to update I really like the story especially new female lead with male lead to gather love them both a lot and his cute little brother with his wife hoping for happy ending
I am going to be serious here. I am a senior in High School, so stability is something I can't promise. All I know is I will be writing when I feel as if writing is good. Or about **** in my life I need to write about. Or maybe stuff I need advice on. Either or, who the hell knows. Give advice on my life if you want. Read about my life if you want. If your not interested then piss off. Also if your one of those people who nit pick everything in a book. Piss off!!!Don't nit pick my ****. This is a journal, you nit picking a journal is like criticizing an art work, or a scientific thesis, but you have no back ground or anything related to those topics.
Just One Word Author ? AMAZING ?? I love ?? thisssss alot .. I followed Hiro on his journey from a 5 year old boy to his current 16yr old boy and it as been amazing ? I love the writing quality..it allows readers to be able to use their imagination to picture the story and Hiro character design is top-notch .. He is hardworking , handsome filial and mentally strong...This book is a must Read guys ??Thanks ? Author for this amazing story ?
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Ayo, it's the Author here. Just want to say, if you're looking for a novel entirely based in a video game, this won't be for you. This novel does have IRL parts in it, some expanding for a couple of chapters even.However, if this novel is what you're looking for, I hope you enjoyed the read. Remember, if you like it, vote for it and leave a review.
it's very good, but why would you use Zoom as the book cover? He is a super-speed serial killer, he is the definition of evil; so evil the speed force punished him by making him the Black Flash, the Grim Reaper of speedsters.
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Great story i like it.
Great book, decent speed of plot progression, unique world design, good mc.Overall a really goos read, and well worth picking up and holding in your library.Many thanks author!~Ethan
Me gusto mucho las historia , el desarrollo del personaje , etc .Espero mucho de esta historia , sigan así... No mames , ya déjame enviar las calificación