Great story line till now and i love it please continue to write this and i wish you best of my wishes for success of this book and best of luck
The more chapters I read, I became more invested. I feel sorry for the male progonist - after everything he’d done for his old world ???. I gave them all 5 because I feel you executed them well. There isn’t much else to say, I highly recommend the book!!! It captures your attention from the beginning, I’m impressed!
This story is moving fast but content is top notch so reading it will be like wholesome. So read it and enjoy it give support to Author. It has a Good start and till now this story is fabulous but let's see how many chapters Author can make in a week.
This book gives a mixed feeling, it’s very complicated. Sometimes it interests you, other times you fall out. It’s tough to review it thoroughly. Let’s hope we get to read more of this to decide if it’s worth it or not
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I like the book But im mad at the author for the direction of how the book is going. i also like how renee is a very good mom and that she would do anything to protect christian.
This writer is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
story is not that great yet it could become good at letter chapters and MC is just so annoying who wanna be a hero using the power of so cold villain.
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Trash? I don't want to say anything else.
This story was a fun read until Leonel never followed through with his ideas or goals. I waited for him to upgrade his brother's abilities with Black Star until they enterd a realm where it became pointless. I waited for him to revive anyone in the silver tablet until it became to late. I waited for him to use the womb and Gold Fish until his realm was to high for it to matter. I waited for Black Star to grow into a decent character. I waited for Lionel to share dimensional cleanse with Aina or his brothers but he never doas. I waited for Aina to help point out areas where his brothers could focus on to improve but nothing. I waited on him to help his brothers but he just does the bar minimum for them to improve. this Story is just Leonel jumping from crisis to crisis and him thinking he'll help but then he never followes through.
Another beautiful piece, going to the next book now. Kudos to the author