Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
The story is lacking in emotion. I feel the MC is just a third party making comments. It's like He's not the MC but rather a side character. I'm pretty sure a side character has spoken more then he has. He also doesn't have any noticeable personality. He's kinda dumb really. All the characters are really. Their like children, even though their at least 15. It's like they can't think for themselves. Example being when asked why to become a adventurer. It all seems forced in the plot, like their forced to not think.I've only read till chapter 30 but you I see no change in the story that has hooked me. The only selling point is the genre and him potentially being a dragonking. But even that is not enough of a selling point with no fleshed out character development or world development. The only reason I've not given it a 1 star is because I didn't read the full story, but I just couldn't. 30 straight chapters with nothing interesting happening. Yeah no.Another reason is because I commend your effort you at least put in making the story. Good luck though and hope you improve.
Hi there!Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more!This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact [email protected] luck for writing!
The novel is a relaxing story. There's some action here and there but its more of a slow paced story. The MC is an Otaku with an interesting personality. Great concept and it is a pretty good story overall.