Another good novel to read and to spend power stone, it's kinda rare for this kind of book to appear here especially the other books released by webnovel are getting yikes.
My first ReviewI understand that this is the Author's first novel and said that the first 40 chapters might be a bit rough.After Reading 9 chapters I was getting really annoyed about how many grammatical and spelling mistakes I could find. The Author doesn't use the words "The" and "a". For example:captian instead of The captianyoung man instead of a or the young man said...Gorilla said:"" instead of The gorilla said:""Furthemore the Author switches from 1st person to 3r person wich is getting me really confused. I had high hopes for this novel.Author! I don't know if correcting the chapters is very time consuming but please fix them so people can enjoy this novel it's not like you have to correct the tiniest mistake just the noticable ones.
The story starts out interestingly enough but turns into justifications to pursue women. The cheating and pursuit of girls in this novel are disgusting to me. I find the novel offensive. Chapters 1-19 are okay when looking at web novel standards but from chapter 20 on I'm disgusted with the novel. I've read as far as chapter 25. Not a book I'd recommend
The summary was wrong. The Mc is a guy. With the same plot in the summary but has a check in system in every ancient locations he enter. The character was good (chapter 25) has face slapping moments combined with live broadcast. Worth a read!
Great Work My friend.
I am sorry for what i will say, i am usually not this mean, but man, there is about 200+ stupid person who paid for this trash novel. I might get it if you liked a type that i didn't like since tastes are various, but here i can't. This novel is trash in all terms and measurements.I swear if they chose this novel i will cancel my subscription
Its decent. Just be prepared for a lot of filler chapters. As in entire chapters of people on forums freaking out and repeating what just happened in the chapter before.
Firstly, you have a great mind!!Excellent world description, imagination and character thoughts. The plot is quite interesting and goes much more interesting from chapter to chapter.Keep Going!!!
I'm impressed and was unknowingly immersed into the book. This shows how great the author's skills are. Keep it up author ? im looking forward to more from you
Trash the title is a huge bait he is progressing as slowly as a turtle............................................................
the novel should be good or atleast interesting but the problem is the translation, and surprisingly this bad translation is actually from henyee translation who was good translator in the past not sure what happened but their translation quality dropped
Very very very good novel. Super action packed start! The fight starting from chapter 2 is awesome. Very refreshing system. Love this novel author. Well done!