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Loving this novel so far there is great character development I just have one question harem?
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Has the same cover as MMO: Pierce Heaven Til’ It Breaks. The novel itself is about what you’d expect. There’s nothing particularly special, and the comedy is revolving around the usual topics you see in webnovel.
It's about a fat MC that ogles at females and can't keep his hands to himself. He apparently saves some girl in the freaking 2nd chapter. So much for plot development.
NO puedo creer que haya pasado por alto esta historia hasta hoy, se merece ser considerada un clasico dentro del genero, muy recomendada para todos
I AM IN LOVE WITH HER! This gives me anime vibes this would be so great if this was anime :0 In the first chapter, I was a bit confused if MC was male or female, but it got clear soon. Adding this to my library I can't wait for more chapters
Like it so far! Good writing (English isn't my main langage thought, so I might not be good enough to see all the possible mistakes ^^), good update flow. For the story itself, the world is consistent and it is not that often that I saw authors using the three main dantian and not just one. Mixing magic and martial arts by that mean is not use often too. It seems like the author as put some thoughts in it to explain the process and not just saying "magic exists because it does...". Even thought the MC seems locked on one mindset, I like the fact that he is ruthless and don't care about moral bullsh*t or doesn't force logic to achieve his goals. He is quit straightforward, realistic and honest with himself. I wouldn't say he is a vilain, it's more like he does what's need to be done to survive while getting stronger. There is no Harem and smut cr*p so far, that's a good point too! I don't think the novel and the MC need romance either. Even if some characters are obviously here just to allow the MC to get some benefits he needs for the sake of making progresses in the story (the hunters or the unorthodox cultivators), it doesn't affect the reading that much IMO.
This is a bit weird point to say, but I like how a lot of plot points and characters try to justify Riley’s behavior and actions only for it to be irrelevant since Riley is the way he is because that’s how he is, Riley is Riley. A monster in human form and who’s irredeemable no matter what. (Touché to the author for creating a unique masterpiece of a story)
Only those who played "Harvestmoon: Friends of Mineral Town" can relate to this novel.. first game i played in gameboy advance.. but it is improved now.
Hey auther first I want to tell you that it's a great novel and you are still improving it, so you have my support and like me there are a lot of readers who think like me.......And finally I hope you continue it as we all want it. ........so please don't drop it?I hope you read this......
I wanted to read this novel. but all chapter are paid. I have never use money on web novel because it is worthless. Bro at leat activated the free fast pass card option or do more chapter which are paid on Patreon
interesting blurb. I will surely read it :)
