Very inconsistent unrealistic reactionsBook is more a like a blabbering all around the place seems like written by someone way young to write or express the thought process
Just the title alone is hilarious and I'm expecting lots of funny moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell the future readers not to miss this one.
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Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
I gave it a chance. Read ten chapters, found myself skimming through it by the end. The prose needs a lot of work, the scenes have no suspense and the overall story just doesn't have anything that warrents my continued interest. This kid is already 18 and still a nobody. If it was intentional, then that just means the author has no foresight. LEGENDS are the best, and they show it early on. Messi being a prime example. Him STARTING at 18 already makes him far worse then his competitors it terms of future fame. I'm disappointed with it, but it seems like a trend with sport novels. Every author botches the beginning.
Here’s just something that should be noted before you readers start my novel.1. The Mc will be OP, but there will be a balance. And, of course, he would have some rationality to think cuz he ain’t an idiot.2. There will be a little harem, fortunately or unfortunately, for some of you. And yes, that means there will be romance.3. MC is the playful type that almost doesn’t care about what happens, but he’s always thinking seriously inside.4. If you have any questions, feel free to ask.MY ENTRY TO WPC 320If you like the story so far, please consider lendingufffc me your power stones and maybe a review. :3I will try my best for regular updates if my novel wins.
Great Storyline, Great Characters! Everything here is interesting and keeping me entertained. Worth of my time I say!Yes, I'm giving the author 5 stars! No, if possible I will give the author P.E.R.F.E.C.T. 100% ??
seems like a good story, it's just translated very poorly you can definitely tell English isn't the authors first language, if you had this story translated better I would definitely read it, but as it is it's far to confusing.
I rarely write a review (probably never), but I have to do it this time because this is one of the best quality novel I have read and I think it deserves to get support and a continuation. Not many novels get my attention as most is generic. For example, mc get powerful and slaughter people left and right and is mostly almost about brawl and no brains and arrogant. But this novel is different from what I have read so far. MC is humble (very rare) and is highly intelligent. He even treats servants respectful because he has virtues ingrained in him from his past life in Earth. Every human is equal.? I hope, his belief don't change. Although he do kill, if he gets offended. This novel need more chapters to judge, but so far it gets a 10/10 from me?
Ima be honest just doing my daily stuff to get more spirit stones..............................................................................
I really enjoy this novel and hope for more chapters in the future! I really recommend this novel because, in my opinion, I can't find many bl novels like this. Also, does anybody have any Bl novels similar to this novel?
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