GodKnight

so far it's ok I have read other novel author always has intresting concepts and story but sucker at writing now author has improved

Simply amazing. I love all the coincidences and the explanations the author inputs into the storyline. However, I feel like the main character should have a more accurate description of his "skill-set." But, this might be the writer's intention in shrouding it in mystery. I haven't read to the latest chapter, but I am gradually catching up. Anyways, I am loving the story so far.

read until the 20th chapter so no spoiler.interesting idea and bad realization is what characterize this novel for me, I mean i understand it's a very interesting idea to have 2  entity of different *** in the same consciousness but gosh. am I the only one not finding the joke funny and instead heavy ?Plus why by the seven hell would you skip the F*****G first batle of the protagonist ????????? it's one of the key moments of the story ! how is he gonna fight, because yeah when i see "immortal" in the title and it talks about cultivation i hope that there will be battles.not to arrange the case, wtf is wrong author ? do you re-read what you wrote ? I quote "[..]He then smiled as he caressed his forehead. He can clearly feel his strength trickling a little with the unlocking of the first petal. He cheerfully said, [...]." chapter 4 on the 4th paragraph ... why are you jumping to present the back to past and you may be thinking and the answer is NO. (it would make a too long critic to list all the spelling and gramatical error (which i do not pretend to be abstained from))now the world case,because yeah the issue above tackle the writing quality, the story development, and with character only good at pun, which are not funny I repeat just ... bad ( it's not even ***ist you kinda feel it want's to be funny but doesn't manage to and end up just being lame and heavy) the character design is also a bad point.on to the world design we were saying, right ?well, it described in three paragraphs, furthermore a dense part about the sect and power distribution WHICH IS IMPORTANT is being push at us like a hot potato and the author expect us to be like "uh ok i perfectly remember all of what you said and wont be lost for the next few paragraphs"anyway this is just my point of view on the story i understand if you don't have the same and maybe I'll read until 30% to see if it's better than what I thought (all my brave support to those hating the novel like me, but who read further).

more please it's really good, like where it's going and please dont drop as most system novels in this theme dont last long... thank you!!!!

First!Also you need a binary converter to read this story if you aren’t fluent in computer language(Filler to reach word count).........................................................................(Also I am just trying to rate as neutral as possible)

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I mean so far it's ok, but his naive character annoys me. I understand that as someone from earth he is afraid of killing, but I don't think Veronica does any unjust killing. in this kind of might makes right world, if someone disrespects you no one will bat an eye if u kill them. He keeps talking about changing Veronica, but he is the one who has to change. also, is killing not part of his training as someone meant to protect Veronica? seriously man he has to accept the reality of the situation he seems like some kinda fairytale hero

It's such a waste...The story has great potential and a decent protagonist  but the grammar is awful. 90% of the meaning is lost because of that. Just hoping that it will be revised since the novel is honestly quite good.

It was good then the author got lazy and then changed the plot halfway through otherwise a decent story. ... .. ........ .. ....... .. ........ ......

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The worst story I’ve found on webnovel so far.............................................................................................................

Long Chen has soooo much swagger. This takes the route of reincarnation into a trash guy's life and making him powerful. His dragon-ness makes it all the more cool.The story type might seem cliche but its the kind we all love to read.Keep writing.....I wanna see how he conquers the 9 heavens and the 7 seas