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The structures of the sentences is pretty bad, in a later chapter idk I did an expample.
The story could be good, but as I said the structure of the sentences is so bad it ruins the flow of the story. Some grammar mistakes here and there.
Story nothing new, but till now havent seen any story which has done a good job at writing such a story,pretty sad
I’m giving five stars just for how cool the idea is. I could think of so many different types of animal fusions that would be cool and I want to know what the author could come up with too.
The author has a +1 for me as i always love a good villain mc. so far i see this novel as one with great promise keep it up. hope there wont be to much faceslaping later
I hope you don't get mad at me doing the first review and giving full points :)My native language is not English and my translator may have minor mistakes. If you indicate it in your comments, it will be improved in the translation of the second volume.The reason I gave myself full marks is because I believe I wrote the best I can now.Welcome to Heir of the Dragon, the first of many light novels you'll read from me.
I like this novel it's good for me, a lot of people are quite quiet when reading this but the story is good, the twist was nice put, the writing is fine but a few spelling errors but it's doesn't change reading of the story which is fine by me, the world back ground were great it took me some time to figure out where the MC were at but still great overall I recommend this novel.
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The story line is interesting... The character are been well introduced and the author's writing style is great... From synopsis to further chapters it helds the reader... Great work keep it up author