Melissa is a good MC!
your writing style is very good. Just a suggestion, maybe break off some of passages that's too long. It'll help readers to focus more.
but overall, it's a really good story!!!
This is the story of a demon who undergoes a transformation from being a gentle and kind person to becoming a cold and indifferent man. Tom starts out on "Earth" and then merges with his AI and starts his journey in the world of fantasy.
I really enjoyed the writing style of this book and the perfect amount of information given at the beginning to understand easily through the story. I think the journey of the main character will take such an interesting turn that I can’t stop reading the pages!
Author does an excellent job of steamy scenes, although it would be nice to read the male lead’s point of view. Female lead, Linda can be a bit frustrating, but keep in mind that she’s viewing male lead and mermen from a sheltered academic viewpoint.
loved it so far ...
Please update more?......️
Interesting story. Can’t wait for the end.
Great book. Loved the whole series
Awesome. Twists kept me hooked. Nice ending wrapped up
I like the story I hope they work it out in the end
I absolutely loved this story!
This is amazing. I love the start of every chapters and I love how well-written it is coupled with the amazingly unique plot. The author is a brilliant one. Please update more often.