Another one of these one sentence per line novels. I can't read them. Clearly this was a script for a manhwa, turned into a novel.
It’s actually even worse than that. Orpal is not only alive, but will probably get an power up as well in the future.
This is actually good novel if you have already mastered the dao of skimming b*llsh*t
The beginning of the story presents an intriguing concept, where a young protagonist's life path is predetermined by the church and monarchy during a coming-of-age ceremony. Initially, the protagonist experiences a decent life, with his fiancée and sister possessing high-level abilities. However, fate takes a turn when they abandon him due to his seemingly weaker skill, despite it having a stronger response.
The protagonist then faces false accusations and loses faith in humanity, creating a compelling setup. Unfortunately, the author appears unsure how to develop this theme consistently. The protagonist's trauma becomes exaggerated, leading to melodramatic reactions that are suddenly resolved with a magical solution in the next chapter, undermining the impact.
As the story progresses, the protagonist discovers a hidden strength within his evolving skill, granting him extraordinary powers like summoning miniature suns at will. This power level verges on absurdity, resembling another popular series, "Arifureta Shokugyou de Sekai Saikyou." However, instead of crafting a unique narrative, the focus shifts towards revenge and trauma, which are resolved rather hastily with a同伴's magical intervention.
Overall, the novel presents promising ideas that are underutilized or abandoned, resulting in a frustrating reading experience. The author seems to struggle with balancing originality and reliance on established tropes.
He is just being sarcastic about the OP part
Ok thank. ?
Read a decent portion of lotm, but have read multiple LONG novels along with having read practically nonstop for two years, that was a while ago that I tried to read this…
Ooohhhhh ?. Thanks!
Why try something you don't like, there are so many other novellas you haven't even tried reading. So why waste your time on something you already know you don't like?
Yeah but it’s not a direct copy, both are still two different novels just with the same system.
So this story has just been axed right? I can't say I'm too surprised. The story did nothing but tease.
Betrayal = NTR ?
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