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well I just stopped reading this as soon as I startedMan giving simp vibes already i mean come on he only wants to goto the university because of a girl he has just seen using the excuse of protecting beautiful things

Fallen Blue your story is amazing ,its kept me glued to the screen the entire time , the various contexts and scenarios you put the main character in are  really interesting ,and how he reacts to with his very snappy slightly crazily personality is both relatable and hilarious .But I just one Feedback is that even though the stoires in the latets arca are still good and high quality Jiang Li has become a bit too passive as a character .I miss the jiang Li in the first and second arc ,He was extremely crazy psychopath  ,destroyed everything in his path ,like an anti hero , however he was still a very good man deep in his heart which is shown through his action to his hosts bodies families etc.He was a very intruiging character and following his journey and antics always gave me the alderaline rush as well as food for thought as well.However I feel that quality of being deeply intruiging with so many layers ,as well his almost pychopathic way of dealing with hurdles in the plot and the various act of kindness he gives to characters insignificat to the plot but which in reality add so much more  whichwas really amazing , is no longer as much potrayed ,which kind of makes me feel bad .Also though the depictions of his personality is till quite good and high quality writing , I feel it would be better if you were to make him a tad bit more selfish ,in that he priorties his needs and desires a bit more , because if he just becomes a character who exists too  make a villanese  happy his character quickly becomes bland and unrelatable .I just wanted say also that for some reason his personality keeps reminding of lelouch from code geass.Also I just wanted to also say that I really want to know what is up with that witch lady and that man in the white robe ,itwould be awesome if the plot become more focused onto their mystery , I assume the witch is part of the main plot .Also is it possible for you to introduce Jiang Li  to other tranmigrators,you know maybe there is a centre for transmigrators just like in Cannon foodder counterattck  were transmigartors are called task takers instead,Also while the male and female lead of each world will be minor villains  or antagonists for Jiang Li can you make a Major antagonist for Jiang Li ,like a master mind Boss Villian  who indentends to destroy the multiverse for some warpped plan ,it can possibly even be a anotther transmigartor or task takers who is Jiang Li s, enemy .Also if Jiang Li faced more hurdles like that of HIV infection he contrcated form the host body in the second world ,and other struglless which take a toll emotionally on Jiang Li ,it would be really good to see more angst in the web novel in the future ,and I alwlove to see how Jiang Li overcomes his angst.anway that was my review ,I love your story do far and I hope my feedback helps you keep writing a better more refined story in the future .Thank you so much for this amazing story Fallen Blue author nim

One of the best books, I have ever read.Please don't drop this like The Path of Medicine with a System.I want to finish this crazy good story.

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F*ck, this novel’s translator is actually a eunuch . F*ck you sh*tty eunuch! I hope you never get hard again!F*ck, this novel’s translator is actually a eunuch . F*ck you sh*tty eunuch! I hope you never get hard again!

Novel sounds intersting, but from the review's it seems there is a lot of controvery regarding hte FMC. TBH i feel if the author did not include that part in the story, there would be very little taken away from the story and a whole lot more added in. Right now, myself and many other like minded readers would no doubt find this situation to be unappealing.Anyways, great story, but I can't read further especially with the FMC's situation at the back of my mind. I turly feel this novel could have made it to the top if you didn't have this aspect in your story. Good luck

I find this novel really nice I just hate it that I can't jump to the future where all the chapters already uploaded done, ich also need 140 characters so that ich can post this

Repetitive.. with fcuking idiot MC .. with his background (number one mercenary) the way his thinking is retard.. So much filler with bullshits conversation..

Since the first pages your story had drawn me in. I will definitely give it my attention. Keep it up!!!!

I would give this book 5 stars except the author has not put out any updates in WEEKS.  how do you expect to keep a high rating when you don't continue with updates? very frustrating.

I keep coming back to the symbolism in this text and it's richer than I expected for what appears to be a light novel premise. Let's talk about water first — it's everywhere. The rain during the time travel, the overflowing sink, the automatic flush, the water gushing louder as the little girl panics. Water here represents both transition and loss of control. You You crosses a threshold (the rain), and then later can't control the water in the bathroom, just like she can't control her situation in this new world. Then there's Dudu, the shark plushie. Sharks are predators, right? But this one is soft, silent, and serves as You You's only confidant. It's almost ironic — she's carrying a symbol of danger that has been transformed into something gentle, just like her brother Lu Fei who appears threatening but is actually vulnerable underneath. The fact that Dudu 'talks' in her dream but is silent in reality mirrors the whole theme of truth versus perception that runs through the story. Silence is another huge motif. You You is constantly being quiet — not making noise, not disturbing anyone, speaking in a 'tiny voice,' a 'mosquito's hum.' She's invisible in her own story, just like Lu Fei feels invisible to the public who only see the 'Lu Trash' narrative. Both characters are struggling to be seen and heard for who they really are. And the suicide note detail — 'he had never been loved and shouldn't have been born into this world' — that's the darkest expression of this theme. It's about erasure, about feeling like you never mattered. You You's entire mission is basically the opposite: to make sure her brother matters, to make sure he's seen and loved. That's the emotional core of the whole book.

please update