THE SOUND OF THE WINDDDD. i dont know if there's a phrase that could be more edgy or chuuni than this but lets just say it gets repeated here a lot. Also, there's a lot of things i could saw about MC's IQ so far, but he seems pretty happy to just leave everything to luck, or plot armor depending on who you ask, so i won't care either, because anyone who likes this kind of brain dead, berserrrrkkkk, chargeeee, bloodlustttt, stomp stomp stomp, story, probably isn't going to have enough IQ to appreciate what i want to say anyway. Also, being overly descriptive, and talkative is a very real prolblem with this guy. Count it yourself, if you move all the actual plot related stuff to one end, and the chatter/random tidbit/useless nonsense to another, a little less than HALF of the goddamn 21 chapters so far.
One of the things that bothered me the most in this novel was the female characters, I feel like the author didn’t know how to work on them, except Zoe, I’m reading chapters 307 and one of the things that bothered me about her, was that the author made Mc call everyone in the group except Vanesa. And speaking of her, it's as if the author wanted to erase her existence, to a chapter that talks about vanesa sending a message to Mc (If I'm not mistaken about her fashion show) and the author just ignored it, it wasn't the Mc, but the author himself who ignored him ... So, I think it is better that the author did not create the character of vanesa and also make a drama about her and Mc, come on, the author even made the best friend Mc's practically ignoring her, and look, from what I saw he should be the one who supports this relationship the most ... The relationship between Mc's best friend and the murderer, I thought it was very forced ... On a night of drinking the murderer, who should being cold-blooded fell in love with him ... anyway, in character development I thought the author could have put a little more attention (much more attention than he gave.)
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I love this story because of the manhua. Zhou Fan is a great protagonist for a demon cultivator. He's ruthless, manipulative, and cruel. Yet you get fond of him over time. The side characters aren't bad. They get stronger over time with the help of Zhou Fan and you can't help but root for them. What I dislike, IS THE HORRIBLE TRANSLATION!!! The manhua I can understand the story, as the pictures help depict their actions. But the novel makes your eyes hurt. I can't finish a single chapter then I have to stop. If you are willing to go through all the pain, then go ahead. But I'll wait for proper translators to finish before I start reading this novel again.
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Err... Who here knows what this story is about?Ideas anyone...I only rated so I can find out what the story is about.Can't I just write what I have to say without having a headache over how many characters I typed?
Novel started out really great, took an instant liking to this novel. Is Author still gonna continue with this novel? Would be great if Author picked it up again, it has insane potential.
I’ll be completely honest here yes I’m 5 chapters in but it’s all predictable. In the beginning he’s a crippled kid that’s the son to one of the most powerful people in the universe. He was treated nicely cause of that and became a super doctor who solved a lot of issues in the medical field. Also checked some arrays protecting treasure no one else could. Married the most talented chick alive, on the wedding night she kills him for no reason. Reincarnates to a family who is on their last leg. Keeps all memories, finds out he’s boarder line crippled. Quickly fixes himself and of course mother is poisoned by one of the most powerful poisons out there which shouldn’t be in the world they live in. Dad is imprisoned cause his sons holy pulse got taken he tried to kill everyone responsible. Finds out they only took the half he can recover. When saving a dude who is about to die and every other doctor said he can’t be saved saves him. Tells mom when she questions him a old man taught him in his dreams. This story is a wonderland of cliches and he’s gonna catch them all. This author is trying to collect every cliche gym badge out there, who knows maybe he’s a immortal 13 year old kid to.
The main character is a Mary Sue, he hears of a problem, immediately knows how to fix it, just because, this leads to there being no stakes and a very boring read.I would not recommend it, as it has been written without any conflict. despite having such a good premise, it has been squandered by this author. :(
The guy who was left behind on the earth what would you do if it was you Im currently thinking about how much I Would feel in that situation.
???? Very confused. This novel does not correspond to the raws. Th MC should have a brother and not a sister.The city is not called Gotham and the murders are different.Seems like the translator is playing author. It would be good to receive some feedback from the translator about what is going on.
I liked the whole thing. The way Jessica was friend from past felt forced but overall it was a good plot so far. I liked the pace not too fast or to slow on movie making and all extra stuff was not in excess or too little either overall 4+ it goes down cos of stability of updates since its not picked there is no updates yet only 60 trial reads!!! rest are 4-5 starts.