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Raw plz, raw raw raw. Similar story are also appreciated.
Well. This is qidian.. Here you can find anything.. But mostly trash novels.. I am serious! I say 90% of these translated novels are not like how they are actually rated! If you can prove me wrong then i shall change my name.. Leaving the PF picture ofcourse.. So back to review.. Don't read this.. Its a rip of version of 'My wife is a beautiful CEO'.. I shall be racist, well a little.. You know.. Chinese like to duplicate stuff a lot.. Like you never had that experience buying some stuff from china and just to get rip off version of what you wanted.. Lel.. But qidian.. Up here you will see that they even copy amongst themselves!!! XD.. You say inspiration and all that bull****? Nope.. I say its in their blood.. Now i please take my apologise if i offended you.. Trust me.. 70% novels in qidian are full of racism.. Thats why they are having so hard time trying to translate them in webnovel.. They gotta verifying if that novel have 'racism' element or not.. I think i just went off the topic.. But blame *140 characters* requirment.. Otherwise my review would've been like this..
"Utter trash novel writen by a poor neet who have no idea how real world works so he is copying others idea to make a living for himself."
don't read this even if the story is good the translator is only copy pasting ML stuff after chap 40.
the chapters are not being translated at all and we are being charged an average of 13 coins per chap
Points to Ponder:
What was the story about?
-The story is about the journey of a young boy who goes through different trials and tribulations. He grows in strength, experience and personality while he makes new friends and enemies.
Who is the main character?
-Meng Qi
Is the MC likable?
-He is a funny guy. He often gets into trouble way over his head, but uses his wits and intelligence to survive. His dream is to be a cool and suave Young Master and to awe everyone with his charms. Unfortunately, he is often seen as a brute due to the martial arts skills he uses. Luckily he is starting to gain more cool skills to masquerade as a bishounen pretty boy haha.
Did you like the book?
-I like this novel very much. The fight scenes are intense. The lore and background is rich. The skill levels are well explained. The characters have depth, their actions will some times make you laugh or bring you tears.
If you could change something, what would it be?
-Some of the earlier chapters need editing & TLC because the grammar can be weird and the terms/jargons used are complicated. There should also be some Footnotes provided by the translation team.
Would you recommend this book to another person?
-Yes definitely!
What type of person would like this book?
-Anyone who loves reading martial arts or eastern fantasy novels would love it. Especially those who like a challenging novel with a complex lore and many martial arts.
the story seems good, but it was hard for me to continue after chapter 5, the writing quality isnt good. .
Guys. This book has given me a reason to read Japanese light novels again.
Just a warning~~~
Also
"The Results From When I Time Leaped to My Second Year of High School and Confessed to the Teacher I Liked at the Time"
Is good.
Like diabetes.
Constructive criticism, hope you don't take it badly. First though - I like your novel. It has enough difference from other novels of the same type, yet keeps lots of the things you would love from those novels. Fast paced, timely updates. I enjoy reading it. However, you write your story like it's a draft of the actual novel. Similar to how an author would prepare the points and events you want in a chapter before writing the actual thing. I'm not saying to write "filler" and "fluff" material just to flesh-out the chapter. I'm glad this novel does NOT do that, but you need to develop situations and events more. Practice that, then do it on this novel, and I think you'll grow as an author, and have a great novel on your hands. Lastly - I'm going to vote for your novel. I think it has massive potential
so good
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This story has so much potential and is interesting. Every character is flushed out nicely. I have high hopes for author to continue this masterpiece [img=recommend]
The story is nice and enthralling. I'm hooked! I gotta say I never expected that one hehe. Also liked the pacing and the storyline. A very unique take on the genre! Loved it a lot! [img=recommend]
Anyone knows raws link?Anyone knows raws link?
Anyone knows raws link?Anyone knows raws link?
Anyone knows raws link?Anyone knows raws link?
Anyone knows raws link?Anyone knows raws link?