It has good grammar. Mc travels on a path no one has tred one before. And he is a demon. It is al good up to this point, but the author does not fully describe how the characters look. He/she did not fully describe how the mc look. Is he tall? Is he skinny? Is he a goth? Nobody except the author knows.
Fantastic Novel
don't buy into the negative comments all of them haven't read enough to judge it
Keep up the great work Author
i really like the story and the protagonist, time-traveled and needed to restore his Clan. The female characters are like supporters actually, so no idea who would end up with him.
it's fun to read, i enjoy it a lot![img=recommend]
You will regret not reading this, so don't you even dare think, "Oh , I'll pick it up sometime in the future." This series is too good. Read it. Now. Moreover, for the fans like me who are thinking that this is shounen ai and will go to find some spicy context on Ao3 to fulfill their 'reading experience', no need! This book has it all ?❤️. On the same note, to the fans who aren't into that aspect, all the best to you for those scenes, because they might get terrifying at times. You will usually get warned by the comments, tread carefully. As for those of us who are into a bit of demented railing, cheers ?
This novel is so good ?I literally want to read it all day
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Ganda niti pre hanip. Recommend ko to sa mga hindi pa naka basa nito. Sa filipino makaka relate kato agad hahaha. Add niyo to sa library ninyo at maaaliw kaayo sa pag basa. Yun lang salamat
I hope it gets chosen
Too good a novel. The world is developed quite good so are the characters. Fight scenes are choreographed well. All in all a memorable novel.
I love this novel. development of mc is very good. Though I don't like his name. most characters have western names who lives in eastern world. mc has indian name which I like. but then he chooses Japanese name. I think if you had chosen Japanese names first, which shows that his mind is stuck in the anime world, nd then chose a villainous name like ravan, or shakuni, or kans. it would have been amazing. raj is a fine name too. but orochi name just doesn't feel right.
I remember reading 1 novel which also had the concept of mc using stats in cultivation world, but it failed in the story department. but this one is pretty good. it takes time and the development is realistic.
I specially love the indian references. are you gujarati too like me??
And I appreciate the effort you put in for the lore behind monsters.
But I would like to say that you move on from the first arc soon. bcz i feel like we have spent too much time here. it is time for mc to explore. also, don't make the loli girl harem member. and if you do, then don't make it loli. she feels like a child to me. if she matures then I don't have a problem.
keep up the good work. I'm supporting you with power stones. I would give at least 1 power stone to you everyday.
This may be the only story on webnovel.com other than sm and lotm that I truly enjoyed. He’s controlling, logical, and realistic and that makes me even more invested in the story. Thank you Author and have a good day.