Excellent novel, thank you for your updates. I like the down to earth relatability of the protagonist. Will spiritual cultivation be introduced?
This story is just in its initial phases, but the foreshadowing of an intense battle for the MC and his FL (Maybe FL? xD!) had been set in stone. I find the concept quite interesting. Although I'm not a big fan of Sci-Fi stories, I do read them occasionally (albeit rarely). The merging of technology and cultivation are the highlight of this story and I am looking forward to how it will unfold.More power to the author and I am looking forward to Theodore and Turia's adventure in the world that you made.
Awesome story with a solid characters and plot! You have an excellent grasp of language with your description that makes reading the story enjoyable to read. Keep Updating, you're doing a great job!
Awful grammar, flat characters, cliche situations and encounters directly from xianxia, inconsistency everywhere. Most abilities are used once or NOT EVE ONCE before being not just forgotten, but deleted. After all the time spent reading their descriptions. First chapters is basically a wikipedia copypaste while later ones are simply not making sense. And the plot holes the size of a galaxy. Oh, and don't get me started about chess-related stuff. As a CM, I was cringing till I dropped despite previously wanting to check just how deep this rabbit hole is. I'm really wondering about those five star reviews through. Oh,and I judging by comment, negative reviews are deleted. Good job.
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real good book hoping to see more
A really good novel. Found this little treasure in the writing contest. The novel contents everything you need for a really good story about a strong female lead.
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A unique concept. However, the story is full of errors such as grammar mistakes and spelling mistakes. However, it is not so serious to the point it affects the understanding of the story. Overall, a good read.
The most lovable part of this book is the background story of the different characters. The build up is lit. Good job.
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