This is a satisfatory ending to an amazing story Well needed and Anyone who has read “The King’s Avatar” and enjoyed it will really appreciate this epilogue where we get to know what happens next
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Pls translate more th other one isn’t bad but it gets unreadable after chap like 20. …….. . . . .. … . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . ....
The best novel I have ever read so far, everything is balanced and the plot was interesting until the very end. I will not take anyone criticizing Mo Ran/TaxianJun ever ?
This is my first time reading a book that has a game feel to it and honestly I'm mad. Mad that I haven't known about this till today, this book is captivating, just by the first paragraph alone I was hooked and I'm anxious to know more and see how far this story can go. Keep up the good work✌✌✌
Stopped reading around Chp 165This book is pretty interesting. I was actually hooked for a little bit but there are some cons that really disrupt the experience for me.The main thing is that the mysteries are a bit exasperating. The mysteries keep building at the worst times; some people may not mind this but i find it a bit annoying because it interupts my understanding of the MC and his emotions or gives me the impression that hes overly emotional or weak willed. Most of the time when the weird random stuff happen, he doesnt give it too much thought or tries to analyze things intricately. Personally, i just felt he could do a lot more. Overall, your story premise is very good and entertaining. Ive been enjoying the story so far.One thing i would like to add to improve the story is to make the MC more focused, analytical, relentless and less clueless in finding out what really happened to his brother. Lastly, you should tone down the mystery and randomness of the events or increase the time interval between them. We need more of the MMORPG feel and less of the Murder mystery feel.
Great novel to read. Translation quality is good,story development is great. Great concept in the novel.Come on guys lets make this novel official. I want to see what happens next how the story twists and turns. And I want to see what his status would be finally.
Really hope it's a good read ??? ... ... ...
Just the first chapter and im already god damn confused. Stories written in riddles from chinese context has lost a lot of the content's meaning after translation. I dont see any point wrecking my brain just to enjoy a novel. ?
Ugh. .
Ceritanya keren, alurnya mengalir dan gramernya juga ok.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Lol! I am actually scared to write comments in this novel. All the people here hate me... I think. But anyhow, great story. I am loving it. Good job. ???