Hey, I am the author of the book, and I would like to shamelessly promote my book.The protagonist in the novel is an evil mc and will get a lot of character development in the future
The book is good and I can see that this author is inexperienced but kudos to you for at least starting something and hope you keep up the good work ????
This is an early review as i just started it & currently at chapter 25. (I did not read the Auxiliary Volume, i went straight to the story to see the actual build of the story within the content of the chapters)I find the story is paced too fast at the beginning & makes it chaotic as the MC is just starting in the new life with no real knowledge of who they are now & the author just jumps around with different sudden interactions to create plot points. The MC at times is oblivious without common sense & not trying to find out more details about this new world or to speak up, but yet acts on impulse with creating interactions that create issues. MC acts like people are too dangerous to stand up to question/interact with them, but then with one person they decide she wants to fight them to see how powerful they are.I will keep reading & hope this is just some hurdles as the author is trying to setup this story with their ideas & readers input & can make it more steady as their direction becomes more solid. I will reevaluate my review as i get further in & redo my review to how it is going IMO.
I want more chapters authorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!
This is just shameful. Check the previous 10 check-in novels and to your absolute shock...you'll find they're the exact same but with a slighty (I stress slightly) different theme. There's nothing wrong in being unoriginal, or reusing a successful concept - but come on, it's not a different story if you just change one word every sentence.
Not very good. A dumb MC, overly convenient power, and constant tropes. Nothing original about this novel and every plot point is a stereotype or just nonsensical.
bad. I hate romance because it's never ever done right and just feels forced but I hate harem even more. I hate when MCs are forced into a situation and simply go with it even though they don't agree but they feel they are trapped when in reality they aren't. I hate when the MC leads on female characters intentionally or not instead of drawing a clear line and ending the stupid misunderstandinds.I am not getting younger and my tolerance for stupid crap is also waning.The story is same old 'copy and paste' formula but I don't mind, just all the above killed me.I'm Out.
Honestly, this was my first lightnovel, I read this on readlightnovel.com when i was on highschool and this caused me to be hooked on lightnovels... for almost 10 years, I've read a lot of novels that was completed but this... I don't know why i still always come back on this novel waiting for updates, it was torture... now that there are updates, i hope the author will continue until the end
Trash .
i really recommended this novel. . for those who like comedy and shameless mc, i suggest u suppott this novel. . less cliche plot, hillarious plot story, amazing and cool cheat system, more and more beauty mc bullied and mc is hell damn op( but it is not revealed to every one, just his baby shi know it) i mean he is op bcoZ his strength lvel up way too much faster just by completing mission. . i dont think he is low key, but there are no opportunity for mc showing off his power. . please support this novel so we can read further chapter. .
Website : qidian china Views : 4.47 million Rating : 8.8(5163) Chapters : 464 Status : ongoingWord count : 1.49 million author rank : platinum
Patently unique world, interesting spin on usual cultivation and system novel. Highly recommended to read. Very interesting water world, floating town environment.