Great book. MC is the ruthless kind, which will be needed to survive in an actual Apocalyptic situation. New ideas and powers (MC is also not Omnipotent and knows everything before hand ) and author has not added evil rape scenes which mostly ruin your mood in apocalyptic / post-apocalyptic worlds. Pace is great, neither too fast nor too slow. Super interesting ! Can’t wait for more chapters! @author u r really good and come up with more such new Novels ! All the best !
I read this novel to it raws ...this novel has good comedy element and far appart from clishe xanxia novels...this novel is all about face value so dont think arrogant nature from mc ...here mc not op from begning but whole world think is op due to its face value..this is very addicting and refreshing If you want to read mtlGo to lnmtl(My senior brother is ordinary)Good mtl and readable and understableHere i would comment on translation ...which is good and clear but need more work on editing
I'd definitely read this book.I've revised my 1 star review now that there is 1 chapter.The real negative issue is with Webnovel's PC vs App discordance. From a PC you can't see the Contest or benefit from it. Thus when this batch of empty covers with only a synopsis landed in the NEW ONGOING Releases as viewed from a PC it garnered lots of hate from me and others like me that didn't understand the problem.
Why does it say eight year old but has the harem tag??? Sussy webnovel. Pedophilia isn't something to advertise. Hopefully he grows up into an adult before that harem tag comes into play
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber celled"Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subcribers. She was around 15.
Thank you very much for this guide. It helped a lot and has many practical instructions. I hope you increase the update rate since a lot of us are currently writing our novels and need this as soon as possible. There are certain topics I hope you'd address in the next chapters. One problem that is bugging me is how can I do plot twist, I hope that my novel is different from the average one and I don't want it to be like the reader would expect. I also have a problem with the number of arcs in the story. I made a basic outline for the whole plot and feel that my novel is too short. Should I add some side stories?
the story seemed interesting but the auhor stupidity runied it. i mean there is no logical sense in any actions the MC does. Do you ever see a 4 year old wandering around alone? He takes taxi? No matter how good a society is, this is not posible and these little things ruined the story for me.
I'm still in chapter 8, but the story makes me want to continue reading it. The characters development and the MC's perseverance even as a kid is funny and encouraging to see. Please continue the progress of the story to a good development.
I like this novel.
AS of chapter 70 Ther are many in My opinion major Problems with this novel. First IT Just jumps without any explanation to you could say a Modest 25 chapter Long Linda Fan-Fic one piece Story .After that where Back to the original Story that trys to answer way the 25 chapter happen't.Then there is the problem of complete Texts getting Copy Paste't From previous chapters in the novel .There easy to Spot because some Times they Talk AS If stuff that is Long gone is still Happening (the Demon Event).If the Problems i found don't geht fixed , im sorry but i'm going to drop this as it will be unreadable.
World Building: Mentions a bunch of realms, higher than the otherwise highest introduced, randomly.Plot: Handsome strong MC everyone wants to be his disciple. Then they proceed to continuously pick fights with him/his disciple for the first 20 chapters.There must be some kind of widely spread brain illness in that world...
Your story was great but I have to tell you listen to your heart and not what people say, it will only lead to regrets. I love your book even though I hated the fact that All had *** with Rena, Camellia,etc. I wanted that to happen btw him and Elizabeth only.but it's still nice. Pls don't ever give up on writing ur novels even though it seems no one is interested in reading them. U may not notice but there were a lot of ghost reader who loved ur novel and was dieing to get an update, someone like me. I don't really like leaving comments but I love your book.l hope you read this message and try not to feel inferior.love you author!!????♥️❤️???????