WARGROUNDS is a work of fiction by SilentMild. The audience of this work are fans of games that has battlegrounds, weapons, and powers. As a man born during the 80s, I'm not fond of these kind of game inspiration novels but reading one was kinda fun, I've got to admit. The major flaw I found was that a ton of characters were introduced right off the start, especially chapter one and chapter two. Repetitive usage of the common dialogue tag, "said" could also be seen throughout. If I were to give a suggestion, it would be best to replace "said" with some sort of emotion to further elaborate the feelings of the characters.I can't say much, since again, I'm not born in this kind of era. I'm not used to playing these kinds of games, but then again, I enjoyed reading it. As for other flaws, I found some grammar mistakes but they are only a few. -Dann Giovanni
Because ur story has high emotional rollercoaster rides. There are very positive characters and they are self efficient and motivated. We can read these chapters with smile on your face and positively in your heart.
Cliché af. Plot armor is very obvious as he gets things right when he needs it. To me the world building isn't realistic at all, imagine if there were a group of people you thought less of gaining higher status and power like if there were African aristocrats in the 1700s. It is painfully obvious that there won't be much setbacks for mc and he would just continue getting more op without much work.
After reading the first 15 chapters it is becoming more and more painful to read this sloppy machine translated novel with minimal editing I hope that the quality will improve in the future but I see that as unlikely.
Nice.
I loved the story, the characters are fun, there's a lot to absorb, and I can't wait for more to be released thank you for the amazing work ?