I'm a sucker for kingdom building and historical fiction. This got both. Now, I don't like some things but they are minor. Grammar is good, mistakes are non-existent. You may feel frustrated by the plot sometimes but you can easily ignore it. At least I did, but again, I'm brain dead after reading too many Machine Translations. Good work author. May the monke gods bless you. Here, have some holy monke bathwater.
a rare good novel..... but I am worried about its future.... he is already very rich ... how will the plot develop.... looking forward to it
This is basically a much more reasonable version of a sign in system. You have to actually put in work to get the benefits and there are serious potential drawbacks as well that somewhat limit you. It's an interesting take on the genre.
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I'm not yet done with all chapters but please do not stop releasing chapters. I can read all the chapters very fast. ?????☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Great novel Highly recommend one of best trial read this time Very entertaining The plot is great Everything is cool till 40 chapters and i would really like this to be picked Wouldn't want such a gem to get hidden
Not gonna lie, I'm not a huge fan of Dark themes but your story changed my point of view. The story build up had me on the edge of my seat. I loved it and I would recommend it to my friends.
Just let me say one thing in advance your novel is great, from the introduction of the characters to the world-building. The story isn't too fast- or too slow-paced and has a perfect tempo. I will definetly keep reading this story!
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I tried to read this book till chapter 23.And here i am now to write a review about it. It's not bad. But it's not good either. If you have some free time and don't know what to do of it , that book might be a good choice.Here are the pros: - Logic is applied here and things are explained very well( tanks so much! That's something lacking in so much books on this app.)- The Mc is not hot-headed or arrogant and is good at studies. - The Mc is rather powerful ** If you don't like "the strong acting weak" kind of Mc , this is not for you( don't know if it will change in the future though)Now , for the cons: Overall, this book is boring. It is mostly the case because the MC himself is not entertaining. We don't know much about his past , we don't know if the previous owner of his new body had friends , he doesn't suffer much in fights , doesn't interact much with other characters, doesn't have an ambition of wolrd domination or anything else than " living a peaceful life"... it's like he is really an EXTRA whose adventure we are following. What i mean is, even Fade( book mc's) internal thoughts were more entertaining than his. I even surprised myself enjoying more chapters focusing on other characters' lives than chapters focused on him, which are honestly so bland.I never see him train yet he always wins without breaking a sweat , he says he is really selfish and doesn't care about the plot( which he should care for a little bit at least, as a minor change can cause world ending catastrophes), and he seems to consider Fade as... his only true menace? What really killed it for me was how he fell in love with Lia after only minor interactions.On the other side , characters such as Lia and Fade are rather well-built. And that's why i'm so surprised that the author failed at creating an interesting protagonist.A part from character development, another problem is the writing quality.I do not feel any fear or tension in the story at all( from its beginning to the 23rd chapter).Some events differed from the book but they are either not that impactful( Lia's change in behaviour) or not introduced or resolved in a way that will make us think" Oh! That seems dangerous. Mc gotta be careful!" ( octopus attacks). It's good that a Mc doesn't focus on following the original plot no matter what. However , when he/she realises that a changement is harmful, he/she should be shown as preoccupied by the developpement of the situation a bit more . Here i only see him "steal" Fade's original opportunities, but never do i tell myself that" the situation is serious. The Mc really needs X item now."This is due to the fact that eventhough we don't know about "fragments" and the person(s) who is( are) targeting the Mc , this mystery is treated in a way that makes it appear as trivial. Other than that , the grammar is a mess( too many errors) , the book is fast paced , inconsistent, and the fighting scenes are not that good.Now , onto the story developement. It's like the author doesn't have a clear idea about how the book should progress.( e.g: The poll to know which reward the Mc would get at the wishing lake )Plus , up til chapter 23 , i don't see any stakes( for now i consider Fade as the sole antagonist). I don't really sense the impact of students' death on other students, the feelings that come with killing for the first time( i'm talking about the mc) even if it is a monster, nor the consequences on the school . And nothing is a real challenge for the Mc. Heck, even the original novel's end has never been talked about( the final bosses, how it unfolded ...).Overall, i can describe the story as a boat transporting statues( the characters) to an unknown port , without going trough as much as a rain.What about updating quality and world background now?It's not that glorious either. The updates are slow and the world hasn't been explored much now . But the only things that have been shown are quite appreciable( the fact that the strongest individuals are ss-rank , unlike other novels where ranks continue to increase).
Written by an author who has never played a game in his life. Has loot boxes for plot armor and MC is a brain dead moron. The story is all over the place with random info dumps and no coherent plot to be seen in 20 chapters. Instead random things happen, MC does something utterly moronic and then another random thing happens in a place that everyone somehow knows including MC yet it was never mentioned before. The game system makes no sense. Despite having a generic RPG leveling formula there's imaginary limits that somehow makes only the rich able to pass them. Why this is so is never explained properly. And finally there's this underlying plot of eldritch horrors hanging around the city that only the MC can see. These things can only attack people who can see them so obviously MC keeps reacting to their presence in the most obvious and over the top manner only to randomly find something that conveniently lets him avoid getting killed by his own stupidity despite zero indication of such things existing before that very moment. All in all its the expected Qidian quality with a bunch of bots boosting the rating already...
The story has potential, but please make the character more bold. I mean let him show what he got and just leave a few trump cards. MC tries to hide his talent because he dont want attention but him betting able to use magic again is already eye catching so having insta cast or just fast casting at the start wont make a difference.. making mc trying to pretend to be weak is just breaking the character development