Should I read this or is it better to wait for the slow LNs?
i kowtow to senior
god no this has the most repeated plot i have ever seen
there is no NTR, I hate NTR so believe me when I say there is no NTR and "she" and "he" love each other unconditionally you can read calmly
This any good, or decent, I'll read anything that's decent and above
Such a shame the premise was good but poorly executed into a trashy web novel. Some trashy novels scratch a mental itch you didn't know you had or make you laugh till you fall over: this novel didn't when it could've. How disappointing.
I totally agree with this
How can something written by someone as great as me not be a 5 star? Preposterous!..... Alright, let's put the cringe aside and get down to business. So, ABAT is my first novel and it's likely you will be seeing grammar and other kinds of mistakes here and there.I have tried my best to minimize the amount of mistakes, but it's not practical to completely remove the man as it can make the reading experience a bit bland since I will have to tone down the writing quality by quite a bit, so I hope you guys will go easy on me regarding writing mistakes.Coming to the book itself, and I will admit that I have chosen a rather generic topic but I can't really help is since I don't have any already established audience so I have to go for something trending in order to gather one.But trust me,the book have it's own unique appeal and you will notice it in the first few chapters.At the end of the day, if you want an OP and sensible MC, solid world background, good side characters with a tint of romance added to the mix, then you should give it a read. Also, I will say it now but MC will not necessarily be ruthless.You will see it in the novel his own perspective of such.
I will make more comments in the future and be more constant with updates as the novel progresses in content and popularity.
Have a nice day!
Review time!
The author has a strong voice throughout the story, and the protagonist definitely comes across as having a troubled past. Plot-wise, starting in the middle allowed for opening up to some pretty intense action, and sets up a nice and deep exploration of the main character. I think there's great potential for a character-driven exploration of the themes and politics that put the protagonist in such a terrible situation.
On the technical side, there are mostly some issues with tense-case and a few misspellings, but nothing a good round of editing won't fix. Some of the dialogue can get a little confusing without indicators of who is speaking, and the extra space could be used to add little actions, facial expressions, etc.
Overall I would say that the character interactions are great, but the dialogue can be a little anime-esque in terms of sudden dramatic increase.
A solid start, and I'm sure once Nekoman finds his feet, it'll be off to the races.
Good but i hate multiple leads
The novel is very good, I enjoyed reading it until chapter 116But as far as I have read, there are some flaws that I myself did not likeThe stereotype of slapping in the face to Chinese novels that no one really likes. I don't know why the authors still write this.Second, it shows that all the children of the powerful, rich family are stupid and jealous, and that they use the resources of the family's wealth and power, as if they are doing something bad themselves, isn't his brother helping him? write like thisThirdly, they say that he is lucky, well, he is lucky, why should you be upset, as if you created everything with your own efforts.
This is like one of the best Yandere harem novels out there in my opinion. We have an mc who was just a typical avg nobody who got thrusted into the world of supernatural by him getting married to his first 3 wives. its journey man, seeing a weak ill guy turn into one of the strongest being, meeting new people, finding out old friends who were also involve with the supernatural world, having cute mother in laws, a lot of oyakodons, witnessing one of the most hated goddess getting character development and turn into one of the best character in the story and helping mc along the way. Mc himself is an extreme yandere for his wives too which was a nice touch in the story, how to tame a harem of yandere? become an even bigger yandere haha. Also this novel has a really big yandere harem with many lovely girls, so enjoy the ride.Final thoughts: as of chapter 777 it has its ups and downs but over all its a fantastic novel.