i get this is fiction but the author is comparing these kids to pro player? honestly losing brain cells reading this
Great story overall similar to other works done by this author it’s an interesting take on what the future goes bad for a bit then goes into a higher tech era I would highly recommend at least trying this story if you like more science fiction story’s if you like this story take a look at his others you will find similar quality
This book seriously deserves five stars! The writer has an amazing literary style that he uses to reel you in and keeps you invested in his book! The description is also off-the-chains amazing, I could picture everything the writer wrote as if I were watching a movie. The only drawback I would have is that the writer suddenly abandoned the book. Please, get to writing soon.
A great story that has nice characters as well as a sense of justice. It also matches up with the Hero feel, where the Hero should kill the bad guys and save the good people.
I'm not going to read it because it looks like it won't please me, I just stopped by when I noticed how much the title and synopsis are so inconsistent with the cover.
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Quite disappointed that this book was dropped. Especially since the author wrote Charm of Soul Pets and Versatile Mage and I think that the trash Super Optimization Fluid was picked instead
Love the book. Huge fan of yours on Wattpad too. Keep up the good work and pay no attention to the haters. Would love to see them write it better
I absolutely love this story 100% would recommend can’t wait for the next update. The only issue I have is then constant stat breaks in the writing it make the flow of the story a bit rough but I know that it is needed so I can live with it.
I personally really enjoy the story, it shows you the other side of humans. And overall is just a good read, quality is really high with barley any mistakes or grammatical errors. The MC is a weakling in the beginning but slowly turns badass and I mean BADASS. But yeah read it before you decide weather is good or not, but you won't be disappointed.
Summary - The concept is interesting, worth giving a try. Overall it's a solid 4 stars. There are grammatical mistakes but they are within an acceptable range, the pacing is slow but it has only been 12 chapters.Overall too early to judge anything except the concept, which feels like a solid 5 star.
I really loved the way author introduced a new type of story.