However, then a shudder pierced me, because I heard a familiar sound.
"No need Rose. That's why I want to enroll in the first place. To control and use my power for good, that is my life goal." (Fannie)
Jens : "I-I'm from the Garden of Eden… Well, according to some people. Melissa Lestrange is from the Garden of Eden as well!"
"Hi! I'm Sera, remember the person who called."
Nice story. I’m curious how it will advance. Keep it up please!?
the first chapters are pretty good, I haven't read to much
I like the way you have your power hierarchy system set up and how the abilities work. Feels like it borrows enough from anime and fantasy tropes while still making it original. My only gripe would be there's a bit too much exposition especially about how powers work down to the gameplay level. When the characters talk about their abilities like there powers in a game it's a little immersion breaking.But other than that it's great!
This has got to be one of my favorite books, Even though i have only read half of the book I love it........................♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
I got hooked from the beginning of this book and I can’t wait to read more of this, I strongly recommend this book. It is well written and the characters fit the role so perfectly.
Man Channel + Urban + System + Leveling Up + BeautyDespite humble origins, he possesses a natural king's heart. Under the guidance of a system, he continuously battles and levels up, winning the hearts of beauties, and ultimately achieves fulfillment.The bleakness and humiliation of reality are shattered in this book's world, helping you realize one life dream after another.
An addictive book that has an MC that didn't belong to Earth. ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
if this novel was put through some serious editing it would be great it's great story concept but in English anyway it just doesn't flow properly.