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There's already enough bed reviews on here so I'm going to talk about the things that I like about the story.I really like how his cheats doesn't make him overpowered right at the start it takes a while of grinding for him to start becoming overpowered compared to his peersAnother thing I don't get is that there's a couple different people reviewing about his really good amount of luck not being used. LIKE WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT not only is he looking if to get the first Divine level weapon his cheat literally says one in a million to get the skill and he pretty much gets it right off the bat or just with a little bit of grinding if that isn't the luck coming into play I don't know what it is and people are also complaining about in combat his luck isn't taking place which in most video games the look stat if there is one is usually related to the drops/random encounters and usually never related to combat
Putting the grammatical errors and the mechanics aside, THIS IS A PRETTY GOOD PLOT! It made me realize that we indeed as writers, have different fortes! I couldn’t do anything like this! Keep it up, Shadow! I could really see potential!
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So far so good in cases of actually modern fighting op mc novels this one is the best till now I hope this one is add to web novel sI would like to continue reading it
This story is promising. The way the author lay the imagery and the structures are on point. The pacing of the story is fine. And the author did a good job as I could feel what the characters are feeling. Great work! Looking forward to more chapters!
since when vit is equals to mana? seriously did the author even know how to play a game or he just read something and plagiarised and change it a little even if he doesn't know a single thing about it
if only the synopsis said 'become wicked and punish the good ones'...
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So far I'm enjoy it! You can really tell how your writing style has improved throughout the chapters. Good job man! I would say to be a little more careful with punctuation and be a little more aware of the pace of the story-- should keep the flow from going too fast but don't make it too slow with a bunch of details. Other than that, you did pretty good. Looking forward to more chapters.
I absolutely love novels with the main characters like this. So heartless and smart. The world building here is amazing, novels and manga like this is severely underrated.
Meh i dont like it.....................................................................................................................................................................................
One of the best novels of wolfs ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
