it's good book very heart touching, try for fp
The story line is refreshing, different from what I'm used to in this app, but there are some grammatical errors, but overall, it is amazing, but I'm really hoping the author would update more chapters.
Hi everyone! This is 'Orange' and its my very first time writing a Novel and I am hoping to learn a lot in this long Journey.. In this story there no raincarnation, the mc have only one single life ? which he love a lot Ahem.. I means the mc is weak but he just happened to have a high luck giving him opportunities to become strong. You will also see a second mc who have system so many #cheat codes ?. If you have any questions you can ask me by replying on this review..
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Author please come back .
Are you the real author or a fake and if your real why are there only 35 chapters here there are 493 chapters on others sites or are you just seeing how it would do here good novel anyway
The term evil differs with what the society constitutes as evil and it differs from one society to another. What one considers as good may be bad for another. Personaly i dont find the mc to be " evil " but he sure is stupid as f**k. The mc is protrayed to have millions of years of experience in his previous life. So even if the mc is born with an iq of 20, with accordance to his lifespan he should have considerable amount of intelligence by the time his age hit 1million. Yet the MC in his second life is completely acting without prudence and common sense !!. Patience, wisdom, intelligence, cunningness, disregard of life, prudence, serenity, presence of mind, sense of self are some characteristics that could develop wr to time. The MC had Time, lots of it. Yet he lacks the qualities that corresponds to his claimed "hundred million years of life experience ". Mr.Author, i dont know if my ramblings would hurt you. But, kindly take my review in to consideration when u create a story like this. I dont find many faults except character design.
I found a mobile g*me on my son’s phone, he and his friends have all been punishedMy son (13M) was recently given his own iPhone 11 meant only for contacting me, his mother, and his friends. Today, I found a disgusting g*me on his phone called something like “Mindcraft”.I immediately deleted the app and threw his phone in the trash. I later found remains from a Satanic ritual he performed in his bedroom, and I am certain this “Minekraft” controlled his mind. He was also watching a terrible g*ming show on YouTube called “PewDieGuy” which I have now blocked.He is no longer able to leave his room, and I’ve contacted all his friends’ parents about this, it seems like this g*me is an epidemic. They, too, are all being punished as well. I am very disappointed and I don’t think he will see the light for a long time.
Marvelous!!!! too good for being a fan-fic i just love how the mc see the world as a zombie and is well written almost no errors i would like to continue seeing how this world develops
oooh the cover is original. I like it! The novel sounds really great, and it has a potential! The story is smooth, and I like how you described the scenes! It was very engaging and entertaining at the same time. It was like watching him from afar and cheering him on, only to find him dead and... no spoilersI really love your concept, mate!
Made it to chapter 94 before i decided to drop the book, mind you the book isn't bad. It checks a lot of boxes. Sadly by chapter 94 it followed the same old tired path of every wuxia novel. Bunch of retarded power hungry spoiled morons who throw their weight around, soon as i hit that section i was like welp time to look for a new book. Now prior to that everything was going great, author made a really good world backdrop and the mc was realistic and refreshing. The thrones concept was also super nice as that adds plenty of room in the story development. Oh how i wish the author avoided the same old super used and generic princesses, prince by the buckets who all act like spoiled morons path. Now if your ok with that then do pick up this book as it is an awesome and fun read. Good luck author keep up the good work i hope to read one of your future books that doesn't follow the same old tired wuxia moronic moves. Cause seriously if you put even 20 morons with immense power and lack of control and totally spoiled in a medieval period city complete with their own guards and backers that city will die and implode in less than a year. You will destroy the economy and security driving everyone out fast not to mention all the ones they will kill just because they are spoiled rotten morons. Now multiply that by say 1000 since you made a sex addicted emperor with a crap ton of kids. Now you see the picture i hope. That city shouldn't exist with those morons running around.
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