I think I've watched something similar of this on a Chinese drama, I'm way past 50 chapters already and I'm getting familiar vibes. this novel was adopted to a drama and I dropped it as it was taking too long to cure his disease while it would have been fine as long as he grew his strength but that's not the case. I didn't like the female lead as it was yourong who's adding the mc's sufferings while she almost didn't do anything or nothing at all just like a flower on a vase. beautiful to look at but no practical purpose while costing a lot of money.maybe the novel is better but I didn't like the adopted drama.
I honestly was not expecting this story to be so addicting to read. The premise of this story slightly steers from general reincarnation novels, but it makes it much more interesting. Definitely expecting this to blow up soon
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finally atleast the mc has balls this time literally and physically .
Very good, I recommend it for cultural people.⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
The translation is filled with many small errors.The story kind of stagnates after a certain point and is generally rather sporadic in how it structures its storytelling. The characters aren't exactly anything special.The world hasn't really been built upon in detail with anything new or interesting since the revelation that monsters and Taoists exist.This novel so far is overall alright, its just that at this point i'm only continuing to read because i like the premise and idea of a mysterious shop that makes transactions. The premise is interesting but it can only carry it so far and i hope that something new revitalises the story soon. It's worth a read imo and if the premise can capture you then you will enjoy your time.
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I Don’t know why reading this story want me to having the urge to quit. The character development is so bad and i have decided to put this novel in my block list.
Give this a try. It's a very good book. Too bad so many people just give up after the first few chapters. The MC is powerless in the beginning, gets bossed around as a slave by his enemies... So what? Pay attention how he deals with his horrible situation. Too bad there are too many kids around here who get impatient if there isn't any face slapping in the first few chapters and ruin this novel's rating. Imho this deserves a solid 5/5.
This is one of the worst stories I've ever started to read. The idea of returning back in time and make changes while not new is at least one not so overused like isekai. Nevertheless what could become an interesting story is ruined by bad grammar and bad characters. The story is almost unreadable, I mean if you publish a story, at least use free programs like Grammarly which would make the story at least readable. This is worse then a MTL chinese novel and that means something. While the idea of bringing new developments into ancient times is good, you need to show how that happens. But in this story there is this 5 year old boy who asks his parents for beetroots on day one and on day two has produced sugar and alcohol. I mean how? It's not how that works. It should at least be believable.
Love it; I'm super frustrated already
An action packed novel that is well written and grasps the reader's attention right from the start. An amazing book by an amazing author !