This novel is on the leve of lotm , reve insani and the legendary tyrend
Really Good!!!!! Really Good!!!!! Really Good!!!!! Really Good!!!!! Really Good!!!!! Really Good!!!!! Really Good!!!!! Really Good!!!!! Really Good!!!!!
Great story so far! Sorry for the 2 ★ in updates. It's really interesting. Keep up the work! The breast are cheat codes lol. I love the story so far!!
DISCLAIMER: Careful not to use flagged words, or the WN bot will auto-ban your review! Now, self-review time! (Slight Spoilers) ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━1. What is RPP? MMO meets Multiverse in the fantastic world of Infinite (literally). It is constantly evolving thanks to the incredible AI overseeing it. The gaming system will begin simple and slowly reveal its depth as expansions are released. Lots of PVE, PVP, Combat, Lifeskills, Events, E-Sport, and more! Expect incredible freedom! There is no such thing as starting Races and Classes: every Player finds/creates their own.The NPCs have their own thoughts and aren’t just mindless lines of code. This gives rise to many entertaining interactions.━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━2. MC Jack’ MF O, the one and only! Expect a steady progression propelled by hard work and incredible game knowledge (not omniscient). He is OP yet not invincible and unfeathered by puny common sense...━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━3. Harem and Non-Harem tag?! Yes, both tags are present. The approach for IRL and Infinite will be very different. Games are meant for one to go wild! Still, the focus will always remain on the progression to the top. ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━4. 18 +? Yes, but do not expect too many H scenes. Quite frankly, just the language warrants a warning at times. Might as well bump it up to 18 + and have some fun, am I right? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━5. This novel is actually edited?! When you find mistakes, point them out via paragraph comments, and I’ll fix them. I publish every chapter on inkstone then open the published chapter in the app to check one last time for typos. The final edit takes about 10 minutes after every post. ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━6. The author exists?! Yes, I answer comments daily. If you have any questions, feel free to ask! Synopsis + This Review + Chapter 1 = Our roadmap through this wonderful journey together! ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━Thank you all for the support! ^_^v, Your friendly neighborhood Zombie, aka CA!
Writing Quality is pretty bad. A lot of the same words are used in the same paragraph to continue the sentences. For ex 'then'. Sentencing is not ended where it's suppose to end instead it's keep going so it gets a little bit of confusing.Story development is liked by me so far. Just so people know, I have only read 19 chapters so far because of premium so this review will be updated once I slowly catch up in the future. Everything else is pretty good.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
I'm not reading this novel for one small reason. It's right there in the description: "Never comply with aristocrats or rich people". Wtf kind of idiotic belief is this? I can already see this mc besting up a small disciple from some glorious clan and somehow gaining the hate of the entire clan, where they would do everything in their power to kill him. When they try to kill him they'll somehow force him into some kind of fruitous encounter and after he's done harvesting that encounter he'll rush back to the sane clan and massacre them. This will happen throughough the entite novel and be the only plot that we'll see.
Warning to those who have yet to start; Author is unoriginal and repetitive. Multiple major story arcs that happen IN A ROW are all the exact same progression. Even to the point where the interactions in the chapter and pacing of the chapters is the same.
I originally started this story just because I saw the word "Harem" in its name but this quickly grew into one of my favorite stories. Even if you don't like Harem I really suggest giving it a chance you may or may not enjoy it regardless. So if you are reading this review I will only say this, Go and read the free chapters at a minimum right now! My reasons? It made me experience a roller-coaster of emotions multiple times, I even had to stop reading for a little emotional break near the end, then BlackFlamer-sama hit me with another emotional truck-kun when the story ended. Now why are you still here? Go read! Shoo shoo. Begone! start reading already. And for you BlackFlamer-Sama, hopefully wn doesn't delete this as well, refer to the gif!
The first 200 chapters are very good because they are focused on the MC. The MC has a very well thought out background. The story pacing and world building is good until you get to chapter 250. After you hit the 300 chapter mark, the writer switches the focus from hero building to setting up for a kingdom building novel and you literally spend tons of chapters on side characters, to-be-killed antagonist, and other horribly boring plots in the novel (filler content).If it wasn't for the novel killing kingdom building content, this novel would be up there in the series rankings but sometimes you just have to expect that the writers actually are aiming to write about a kingdom building novel and the MC is really only there to start out the novel. Maybe I will come back to this novel when all the current arc is done because it is over 33 heavens-tier boring.Maybe it's not kingdom building but it certainly is a lot of off screen time for the MC in terms of time off screen and frequency between each off screen session.
I have wanted a cultivation novel based around an auction house. I really hope this one isn't too bad tbh..................................
I like the story, but the action is too slow. A typical case is a one-day test in the novel, but the author describes it in more than 40 chapters. Slow character development, unnecessary reflection and repetition.