Kinda different, good to see a new ranking system, names are interesting too.I don't quite understand everything yet but I like the way the story moves from a place to another instead of POV.Interesting story, any updates?
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The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read
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"You know its not nice to call a person a monster behind their backs." The trio froze and turned around to see Keres whose weapons and armor were bloodstained smiling at them. Don, Con, and June immediately cow towed. With tears in their eyes they apologized and also asked for forgiveness. The trios actions brought a smile to Keres face. He also didn't expect them to be so scared of him.
this story is absolutely amazing, you can tell the author cares and adores this project, from the power system, to the research he's done, to the world the mc lives in and to all the characters who feels like living breathing people with their own lives and motives. the grammar is probably the best on webnovel and the story is relatively easy to follow. only cons are that the first 25 ch are basically a parody, but it was fun in its own right and shifted to an original story as natural as possible, other con is that the first 40 chapters are info dumpy as all get out, but author fixes that relatively quickly, the pro of the info dumps is the author's immaculate descriptions of everything from characters down to what the character has in his hands, so even though it was a chore to get through, it added wonders to this world, I loved this story, the chapters are also hella long... you can also learn a lot in this story toops. don't expect too much in the way of action and powering up because it's mainly a slice of life magic teacher story who also has incredibly good righteous morals
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There is actual science in this.The MC doesn't go back in time just because of "feelings" and "I regret this!".He actually modeled the timelines. But that's not the best part of this story, it's the character interaction. The kids, his sister.Highly recommended.
Overall, the chapter structure is quite neat and organized. It was a pleasant experience for me as a reader. Additionally, the story is quite detailed, and I find myself learning a lot while reading it. Every character didn't have much exposure, but I guess that is how this webnovel is taking its path with the main character as the focus of everything. Or perhaps it is because it is a first-person type story? I don't know, but it is still an enjoyable read for me despite the moderate pace.
Very Extraordinary, Sakamoto's life is really colored by suffering. The way the author designs the characters is amazing. Keep writing, fire...