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Webnovel this novel puts out 3 chapters a day and you have been saying it’s 3 chapters a week for over a month so you need to update this. And this is a great novel and I’m glad I came across it.
it was good , it was enjoyable but then I regretted it, I should have read the reviews before meeting such a useless mc
I like this novel but the author doesn’t update anymore!! Is this dropped or not??
Read to chapter although intresting premise and i enjoy the interactions with “Nyx” However I dont like the fact that he dosent quit his job, I dont like the fact that He is a beta male, I dont like how the government thinks he is some super genius in disquise who want to live a peaceful life, I dont like how deppressing his life is, I dont like how useless everything seems including the system, I dont like how BETA the MC is, I dont like MC being a beta maleAs we all know important things should be said thriceOverall intresting concept and i would enjoy the book if the genre was for meHowever it just isnt my cup of teaAlso for the first like 13 chapters i thought he was in america now i THINK he is in japan
I read this a couple of times, and I love the story. I didn't know why this wasn't chosen last time but seeing that the translator has taken a break and stuff, I can't blame anyone lol. I mean, I did read when it came out on trial read at that time, but didn't notice that it wasn't picked after I read finished and forgot about it. Only after I read it after the fourth time did I notice lol.Love the face-slapping in the novel, and the comedy which is portrayed between the two lead characters in the novel. The Father and son duo in the show and the difference between them was very entertaining.Mostly readable translation, better than majority of translated ones. I don't need to see much about Story Development, you just need to read it and come to understand why you should like it. Your choice though.I can't say anything about Updating Stability, because you know, this is a trial read. But I'll give it a five to make it an overall 5 star review, because it deserves it.Strange... I can't seem this review properly. I would've been more descriptive but I'm just quite tired lol. I may update this review to give a better one next time.
I was reading this, and it made me spend the rest of my coins on reading as much as I could!
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Great Potential yet Sub Par Execution(Skip to the bottom for TL;DR)So far I have read upwards to chapter 75 and all I have to say is this story has potential.The story revolves around the main MC Ye Bei who is an immortal that has outlived many historical figures and gods. It is also mentioned quite frequently that he has been secretly guiding humanity for 90,000 years.The premise is quite intriguing if you are into massively overpowered mc’s, but where the story starts falling apart is as follows:1. The objective of the MC is massively confusing! There are no clear end goal. From wanting to visit old “friends”, eating their cooking (apparently he teaches all his friends to cook his favorite meals), to being omnipotent/omnipresent but cannot fathom the secrets of immortality yet seeks to know more, to finally wanting to find a girl which he claimed he doesn’t care for and someone named the Old Deceased (whom is hinted at being the girl at times then a man at others).2. The author tries extremely hard to make the mc more mysterious but it simply ends up in a conflict. One minute the mc wants to punish traitors but when his desciple wishes to help, he gets angry and wants to do nothing about it and just explore the world. Things as simple as having dinner is strethed to 2-3 chapters having to explain the nuances of his every action, words, and their meanings.3. The name bombs are ridiculous! Every action the mc does leads to a flashback of him either teaching/guiding a historical figure or simply letting them put their names on his work. From painting, playing chess, to something as simple as grinding ink. Reading this feels more like reading a history text book.4. This point also ties to the writting quality and grammar. The story has a lot of grammar mistakes. Some are so bad that they change the narrative of the story being told leading you to be confused in the following chapters. They are not only easy to miss but annoying to have to think about what the author meant once you find them.5. This final point ties with the third and fourth points. The large amount of name dropping and sub par writing quality creates confusion in the sense that character names change frequently and out of the blue! Every character tied to the mc has their real name, pen names, nicknames, and names the mc just spontaneously makes up for them. One major example is Wang Xiu who also goes by Winter Jasmine then out of nowhere it changes to Ying Chun. It is as if the author feels that he must inform us of every characters name, surname, nationality, and pennames! Should you stop reading for some time and return without briefing yourself on their many names; its easy to get confused about who is who.TL;DR - This story is quite slow and has objectives all over the place. It tries to much to build mystery and a sense of omnipotence. Paired with mediocre grammar and a large amount of name dropping, its the perfect mixture to confuse the unsuspecting reader. Did I mention that it is painfully slow? Be warned, something as simple as eating or painting can and will take up 2-3 chapters.I would like to thank everyone that has read this far. I would like to state that this review is my personal opinion gathered from the first 75 chapters. Enjoy your day and give the novel a try; after all, it has a lot of potential.
It's been a while since I've been spooked this much. This is definitely a great horror novel! While other horror stories tend to lose their scare factor after a few chapters, this one takes ahold of your interest and keeps you wrapped in that lingering sense of creepiness and fear. I stumbled upon this story at night and was rather chill about it at first. I mean, how scary can a webnovel be? Then I realized how foolish I was. Now, I can no longer sleep soundly. It's like I feel eyes staring at me as I slumber. If you are brave, give it a read as it is worth it. But please proceed with caution. ?
Was interesting at first, but got repetitive and boring because there isn't really a story or plot, just constant faceslapping.
This book was absolutely lovely, you dis extremely well