This novel only show one thing to me. what is that? i tell yah. this thing show how stupid and bad Thailand people are bad or horrible in english language. who ever put this thing in these site and asking people for money. is the most stupid idiotic person ever lived. please before asking someone their money and before translating a novel make sure that you know at least a proper grammar so people could at least understand your novel. not these one. this is almost not readable.
couldn't make it past chapter 1 unfortunately.
Bro listen this was one heck of an adventure for me cuz first of all I'm not interested in these kind of novels but my friend insisted and boy was shocked like what an amazing story so far, you really represented the Webnovels writers potential with your work, keep up the gud work.#UPS gang❤️
The story has a good path thats has many optional path it could go! Seems like MC going to be doing some early gains in his child hood and I wish to see his age progression gradually over chapters onward... but to many reader that would get tedious for them so if Author could do 1-1# to the beginning! Some highlight reel of family moments and parental shenanigans!
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Just came across this book and reading it as been interesting. The writer need to put in more friction and romance to make it more interesting. Good writer and translator. Keep it up.
First of all, thank you for the efforts you put into this story and still leave it free to read. When I looked for new novels, I didn't think I would find a hidden treasure here. I can't understand how this story is still so unknown, but I look forward to how your story progresses.I normally don't write any reviews, but I want to show my support to the author and the great work.For Writing Quality, there is really nothing to complain about. I didn't find any grammar mistakes, which would have interrupted my reading experience. I can't say much to the chapter updates, since I binged the novel up until chapter 83, but I think they are okay. Definitely something to look forward to, when a chapter is released. The Story Development is where I have to take away a star, since from the point when Loran was hurt by the Iron ant (crippled his hand), I lost some of my first optimism for the story. I'm just glad that I still continue to read, because oh boy, that game update in recent chapters with the introduction of the magic system delivered and I'm quite happy that Loran goes for the magic build now.A major point, which actually helpd the story in my opinion are the different POVs of the main cast, that helpf in further developing their character design. My favourite characters as of chapter 83 are Loran, Yin and Yang. I really hope that Yin will find happiness, since her situation seems to be really bad. On the other hand, I'm not quite sure if I like or hate the character of Zed. The world background is steadily being updated as we journey with the main cast. I actually like the village building aspect of the story and hope to see more of the world and other player bases as they appear throughout the story. I'm also wondering if there are any NPCs and their settlements.
Really interesting! Supporting my buddies excellent new work! It may be just for fun - because it is a really fun read! Now to overcome the barrier called 140 words minimum. Here's a story.It was late at night. Zeref had just closed up when he heard heavy footsteps outside. *Stomp stomp stomp*; then they stopped - right outside the bar doors."Hello...?" He called out; but it was quiet; with just the pitter patter of rain outside.(Wait, rain...?) His eyes widened in horror.It wasn't raining.It was...Oh it's done. 140 characters reached.
really like this book but really wanted to see the rest but think it's been abandoned as has not updated in like ages csnt waited for rest .
trash, there's not even a world background explanation the author just dictate there's a game everyone will need to play and that's that.1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0
You should read this just for the first volume. An actual masterpiece
Honest ReviewThe Good: Love the background of this! Nothing very new, but still different than a standard video game novel. I also like it that it doesn't have any reincarnation or some other cheat system like so many on here do.The Bad: MC started out good, but he suddenly went dumb around chapter 44... The women swoon over the MC waaay to easily, the plot convenience is very strong in this, like how does he happen to find a legacy item when the hundreds of thousands before him missed it? The gaming system itself needs improvement, it feels like the author doesn't have much experience with gaming. This isn't a bad thing, but going 4 months without even getting one level is a little much. Lastly, premium chapters so soon is terrible... It's not hard to tell this is someone's first novel and charging SS for it is a bit shameless. We may love those kinds of characters in novels, but not in real life.