nice, it's really captivating. keep up the good work.
Best book i have ever read. Not sure if i'll ever find a book that tops this.
ill fix it~
i don't know how he get the cat, why people say his cat is useless. How the ranking system work, what happen when he awaken. I mean at least give me more information in the beginning especially the earlier how the MC meet the cat
U know I'm thinking of giving it lower star rate but the more I'm thinking the more i figure out that there is nothing to critic about this novel. The character development is top notch, the mc is good, world building is not yet because it just the beginning of the story. i really enjoy the slow development of this novel. the humor and slice of life comedy is great to read. It is slow story if you expect a overpower or fate fortune encounter mc you can walk away. No, just stop reading and indulge in your dream like cliché face slapping moments.
its very good, not like other GOT/ASOIAF where mc just conquers westeros and does not improve/ introduce earth stuff
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Hello, I do not have vast experience in writing novels, but I do know that every opinion and review is valuable. Therefore, I would take this chance and express my thoughts about this story. First, there are no significant grammatical errors in the story. There may be some in each chapter, but it does not hinder understanding the flow of events.As for the development of the story, I think that while it's great and well thought out, there are chapters that are 'somewhat' insignificant to the story that I think can be described in shorter words. This is also related to another issue regarding this novel. I don't think I have the qualifications to advise a writer since I have no experience regarding that. But, as a reader, I think that the author likes to give too much detail in describing things in the story. For example, the author will explain the logic behind something that still has no significant role in the current phase of the story. I think that instead of going into too much detail as something was introduced, it would have been better to just give some overview regarding it until it becomes significant to the story so that you can describe these efficiently and timely. Why am I giving such a fuss regarding it? It's because I think highly of the story and it drives me mad to see the story progress, but it irks me that some chapters that aren't too far from being cheap fillers are present. It's good to present the story of side characters, but going into so much depth that causes the story to somewhat lose its luster is not very good.As for the character design. In my opinion, the author did very well in describing and giving color to the characters. Each of them has their personality and identity, causing their interactions with each other very lifelike.As for the updating stability, I have no issue or opinion regarding that.Lastly, for the world background, the author did excellently. The author did not give too much nor too little information, instead providing just enough description about the world and its power structure.Overall, I think that the story is good and is worth a while. The only problem is still the use of too much info in describing certain things and the chapters that resemble cheap fillers.
So there aren't that much chapter yet but What I read it is amazing! I really love the plotline and hope that it continuous the in upcoming chapter .It's definitely worth reading.
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An easy to read novel with good narration and good plot, the sentence structure is on par with most of the good novels here, I hope you keep writing author this is great!
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