This is good story, but it is little bit too fast paced for me. I think the game introduction fell short, since the start was just too fast paced that in my opinion skipped a lot stuff, so early info dumps could have been avoided, by making MC do more ingame stuff which would have let us find out about the world with the eyes of MC, otherwise good story and I like the writing quality, but slow down the pace and it will be even better one.
It's ok to read if you have nothing else. Huge downside is that after chapter 40 it was picked up by the translator "549690339
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Very good novel! MC is a reincarnated guy in a cripple body, he gains his powers back after some time. He is not a forgiving type, as title may suggest. Relationship with his family (close one) is very good, his parents and grandfather care about him, so it wont be a revenge plot where he runs,power up and kill everyone. Thanks to his newfound powers(they slowly influence him, i dont want to spoil more;p) he dont have a "moral judgment" like typical reincarnated MC on topics like killing - you are in my way, death. Plot starts to thicken after he gains his powers, so be sure to read it:).
I really like this concept ... I hope that this novel will be translated ... I just wish the mc wouldn't kill all the humans.... Again I wish that the novel would be translated...
Very good book. I was looking for a book with an MC who created a gang and I found this absolute gem of a book. The MC's system is not super OP but it does give quite a big edge compared to other people. I personally don't like it when the MC's cheats are too OP because then there wouldn't be much of a story to write. Characters are all properly fleshed out and their personalities are all able to be distinguished easily. The story goes forward quite quickly as well but not so fast that there is no connection formed between us, the readers, and the characters in the book. Writing quality is very good, not many mistakes and the sentences flow smoothly. Any mistakes that are actually there are minimal and can be ignored. So all in all, recommend this book very much
I'm not going to be reading this further. I did not find this story to be enjoyable. I think the biggest reason why I did not enjoy reading this story was because it was so similar to "Rebirth: How A Loser Became A Prince Charming". I don't have much evidence to back myself up, but this story is giving me vibes very similar to that of the above mentioned book (which exists on QI and is completed for anyone interested). Both books seem to be oriented more to a female audience. I don't really enjoy stories like this.
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Starting of the story is quite good. I thought he would make full use of system. But he rarely uses system, under the pretense that the system may not be permanent. Some battles are very long description ( literally boring) and some battles were not even of MC side, they were battles of other kingdom ( nearly 10 chs of single battle of that kingdom).
I like reading the comments and reviews more. Specially on how our author here defends himself. I do say for sure he has blind confidence about his work. But please remember Mr. Author, not everyone can be pleased easily. As for the ones who gave their own opinions and reviews, please do remember that the author is writing this story/web novel using his own limited ideas/mind/brain, heck he might even be dreaming scenes for his story in his sleep before writing them. Amateur authors/writers are different from real authors/writers, most writers/authors are even graduate in these kind of fields, meaning they are already a master of their own craft, they even probably spend a lot time just to study (includes: higher English lv, grammar expert, story chart/flow etc... ) before writing their own work. Real expert writers will finish a volume of their work first, then spend a lot of time reviewing it and editing before posting them or publishing. Very different from most amateurs. **: I am looking forward for more roasting. Xd
I want more! Please update it ...
Its getting more interesting now. I just hope William and Bailey, they get each others love. And they stay together till the end..