I really like how the story develops.. granted grammar is good..Though some situations remind me of the other apocalyptic stories .. I am not bored and have nothing other than..... Please update..
I really love this story so please keep it up.!
From what i've read (chapter 9 50%)The general writing and story is quite decent but lacks a few components to really enjoy the novel. That being the fantasy part. It lacks core systems that Are logical and easy to understand such AS instead of might use strength or spirit damage to magic damage also in the world you have set up i see it hard for the character to find trials where theyGet stronger, more information Lore, character development. I see they have quest via the system so this might change but Even then it would lack some small components I think if you add magical realism with a good magic or aura system it would make the story more enjoyable for the reader.
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I must say I was very intrigued by this novel's concept. I never read a Mafia-themed VR novel before and that caught my attention. As I was reading there were many things that made me stop and go hmm. For example, when we first meet the MC he was Civilian #3207. That made me wonder what type of world he lived in where the people didn't have names.I was upset that he died just by helping someone, I literally shaking my head chiding him about playing good samaritan. The game itself looked to be very ********. The action at the start was wonderful.I can't wait to see what the author does next in the gameplay. This will definitely be a fun read. :3
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Not making a big review this time but I really like this book. Characters are alright, the Mc suits my taste and the others are amusing or fine in my opinion. Unique setting too as it’s apparently the dao-ending period where cultivation is going down as the world’s spirit qi is weakening. Kinda slice of life, action is fine I guess but I mainly get a comfy and relaxed feeling reading this. All in all solid book that I recommend to you all. I really didn’t like last week’s trial read but if the other new books are like this one then it seems we have a good selection this time. Cheers everyone, thank you for reading my review.
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I love this book I know it's available for free but the mtl is horrible plz continue to translate to 1800+ chapters....
I like the feel of it, it can become some nice story but one ****** clique can ruin this, since it seems you have taken heavy inspiration from japanese novels beware of being your avarage weeb s h i t. (myclasshasbeentransportedigotnothingimopananyway)The first chapter leaves good impression but for the love of god please simplify your status. I know you are trying to make a good game as well as a good story but enough is enough have a good time writing. [Its your novel thanks for reading this.]
Review rating is a 4.4. The book really isn't bad except being a little predictable. MC's change in personality was way too fast and his acceptance of his circumstances as a vampire is way too quick. On my part, am just getting a bit bored of weak to strong novels in such a manner. There's nothing new or unique about it. Plus, he killed someone so quickly. I also don't like MC's who like to keep low profiles too much. All in all, its 30% the book, 70% My natural likings. Its not bad
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