Love reading this story
brilliant thanks ...
perfectly perfect fine
Great story line, keeps you wanting to know what will happen next, however it needs a lot of help with grammatical mistakes, really needs to be proof read
This is a good novel, just taking too long to read, please update
This is my first book on this platform. Hope you all like it. It's an office romance with controlling and demanding anti-hero, and Kickass fiery heroine with a dash of mob romance. You'll find everything in it and lots of feels. Welcome aboard.... Hearts and smiles!
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I am not okay with how good this scene is. Bei Qinghuan literally makes sweet and sour marinated fish with her mom, packs a lunchbox, goes to Qin Zhenghua's house to deliberately provoke him, then runs to eavesdrop on their family argument while eating the fish she made. The imagery alone is cinematic. Picture this: dark evening, street lamps lit up in the compound, her squatting by a window like a little spy, holding a lunchbox straight out in front of her like a gecko pressing its ear against the glass. And she's eating the best part of the fish—licking the sauce first, then the meat, gently spitting out the bone—while Qin Zhenghua is screaming inside about Tao Su. The contrast between her calm enjoyment of the fish and the chaotic drama unfolding behind that wall is almost comedic. But underneath it all, there's this deep sense of justice being served. She's been wronged, manipulated, looked down upon, and now she's literally feasting while her enemies destroy themselves. The Tao Su revelation is the emotional climax here. Qin Zhenghua finally admits he's been sending his salary to another woman, that he wants to marry a country girl, that he finds Bei Qinghuan 'uncomfortable' because they grew up together. It's disgusting but also liberating for Bei Qinghuan. She doesn't need to marry this man. She never did. And the best part? She's not crying about it. She's eating fish. That's the kind of emotional independence I want in my protagonists. The brief romantic hint at the end with that magnetic voice asking 'For me?' is giving me chills though. Who is it? Is it Representative Jing? The Correspondent? I need answers.
Exactly writing and story line.
love this book an emotional rollercoaster
I highly recommend this author and the entire series. But start with “her forbidden alpha” and go from there. You will not be disappointed! It’s rare to find an author who’s work has so engrossed you become emotional for the characters. Happiness to anger and tears! You won’t be disappointed! <3
Good, engaging story, but that’s where the +ve ends sadly. Written like an excited child, text has missing words, additional words that shouldn’t be there, VERY poor punctuation & spelling errors on every page! Writer often forgets names of her own characters. GET A PROOFREADER! won’t read any more