Please excuse my poor english,This is the second starbound fanfic i've ever read, and if you're tired of those wuxia, cultivator, and those narcissistic prick then i shall say this novel may be perfect for you. And don't worry if you not familiar with the lore or never play starbound before, the author kindly covered and explained it all (and chucklefish may gain another starbound player).So far, The story is following the canon, with a bit spice of lore and interstellar conflict. And i can't be amazed of how underrated this novel is, i mean it's not everyday you can read sci-fi fanfic in this website.But to be honest, starbound lore is full of hole, the overpowered personal warping and teleportation, the races background, device mechanism, and i hope the author explain the outpost in details, i mean a dimensional HUB is should be gigantic, sprawling cities, advanced ship in the port, armory of advanced tech, or maybe that's why they call it "outpost". I think The author should add his own lore, or fill it with crossover or better yet maybe mods, i'm sure it will give him the idea to progress the story other than the canon. Other than that it's all good, just need a bit of realism. And i love this novel, hope you the best.I don't mean to act bossy, and cocky. But if you found this review offending then please send me letter, i will apologize properly.
Very interesting book! I love the flow. Looking forward to read more. I learned new things. And the more I read the more I get curious about what will happen next. Job well done. Keep it up
Ohh author san has another book. I love that other apocalypse genre novel already and this more, I might worship you. Joke i am just exaggerating cause this the tenth novel I've read and the first one is author san other novel.Love your woke but a bit overly detailed that it encompassed an entire chapter completely.
Damn..This is one of the best books out there..Keep it up..Mc growth is excellent..Hope author will release more than 4 chapters a week..
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This is best apocalypse novel i have read ?????????????????????????????????I hope author will pick this up at some point
I really like this book and I would 100% totally support it. Great background, great character development, op system, I would read this again from beginning to end, like the romance overall one of the best novels I read so far. Author keep up with the work thank u.
It's generic trash, don't get why people defend it, i see a couple of bots in the reviews as well, pls don't translate any more of this type except if it is actually good
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Awesome book so far. I will be disappointed if it isn’t translated. ?????????????????????????????????????
Definitely a well written story!One of the strongest points as well as its weakness for me was the attention to detail. I could imagine everything the author was describing perfectly, but at times it became a bit much. We have what feels like the character's entire backstory first thing in the first chapter and it felt a bit cumbersome. BUT! It was all written beautifully.My only advice would be to do more showing and less telling. Other than that I think you have a promising story on your hands :)
Luigi.