Beginning was good. But dropped the novel at chapter 20. Synopsis of the novel is not clear about the gender issue of MC. What a waste of good writing quality.
Super interesting!!! I like the style of Yan Yan.
started positively and then declaring war on itself in the next chapter
There are only few chapters but so many things already happened. I can see the hint of world building, the development is also good. Language is also fairly good.There were some problems, but over all decent novel. MC has no goal right now, but I saw Author's comment that he will give him goal through journey, so let's see. I don't like MCs without any proper goal.
Definitely a very interesting storyline so far and excited to see where the story goes in the future chapters!!
Stronger from a sapling. This is a copy of that novel with some color changes on the characters...............................................................................................................................................................
Her uncle said he will help alina if she needs help vs the s rank intruder and nooow all of the sudden for drama, he cant help her cuz they can only help if the intruder is z. Which also makes no f sense cuz its not against other humans but f intruders who want to destroy humans like w t f. For reals are those authors even thinking, i understand some minor errors if its 100ts of chapters in but its chapter 16 and already massiv brainlagging author so frustrating cuz it happens like in every f novel. In new worlds like no world buildign at all, world trees couldnt think about solutions a human mc can come up with in a span of couple hours.how did this get 4,5 stars i will never understand rly 1 of th worst novels.
It is really a very awkward story, but I like it’s situation. I didn’t understand on the chamber. Why dirt and cobblestone? Whenever I create a tunnel which is really important to me or unimportant I surround it with obsidian or iron blocks. At lest create an iron farm. It’s super simple. But have you ever faced an Creepysta? I seriously wanna know. At least Herobrine?
FIRST PARAGRAPH GOT ME HOOKED. I love this genre... I love the dystopian genre in general...Now I can see the clear reason this book clicked on me as soon as I read it. Kudos. Kudos. Kudos. Kudos to the author!
There are few chapters but it's a good start for a fanfic, I can't say anymore cause there isn't much to say just that for the start is good and has established a good foundation.
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