I hate harem. This is the only good one, because its takes a longer time with each person.No real complaint about spelling or grammar.There is a lot of potential here, keep it up.
continue the story as in the online chapter .
"Kenji!" i called.
Zuuuuuum!
Stumbling out of his battered Nissan, brushing runaway lasagne off his lap, Bob tried to stride magnificently into the office. He strode across the reception room, his shoes clicking on the fake white marble, and stared contemptuously down at the tired receptionist.
Guys be aware that the last chapter from the original author was posted the 12th February. So we will have to wait some times before the next chapter I think.
The group of four were going through the forest now as they rushed to Sunagakure. They were quickly moving through the trees as they saw a person that they recognized. They saw Temari heading back to Sunagakure after from what Riku had heard was they were preparing for the next Chunin exams. They went over to her to discuss about what just happened to Sunagakure.
It was also the time when Weed's Facebook status did not display "single" anymore. Instead, it showed, "in a relationship with __". That's right, Weed was finally into a relationship. Albeit it was a shitty Long Distance Relationship [L.D.R.] but a mango is a mango, no matter how rotten it is. The girl was probably stupid, after all forget about getting into a relationship with him, who in the world would talk to a guy like Weed.
ten in power nine(billion) FLOPS(float operations per second at
Sans would find himself waking up from his bed! Not from a nightmare...but literally remembering he was engulfed by darkness form the void and now waking up at home. Wait, his home?! He looked around at the normally constructed house where him and Papyrus lived. Was the reset a success? He quickly hopped out of his bed and ran for the door. And to his surprise, the being he yearned to see was standing tall in a 'knocking' pose about to knock against Sans' door.
"Ahhhhhhh. I cant believe we were played by that witch. The biggest weakness of them were right before our eyes but we didnt see
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