so far the story is quite interesting the mc has a different way of upgrading his card the rest and it looks that even though he wants to be alone the fml would not let him be alone
This is the third book that I am writing after gaining lots of writing experience from my first two popular books.Join me as I tell you this interesting story, a fantasy which will leave you feel excited and awed.Feel free to ask any question here~
can do better,......................
Overall, after reading, the book is good.Story starts with MC capable of possessing Chutulu, and the offered sacrifice was used by MC for Unboxing videos. Similar to Transdimensional marketing.Later on, we are introduced of his world background, and Chutulu's world.Story starts slow but worldbuilding is great. Meanwhile translation need some proofreading as few texts are missing.
Absolutely love this novel! Author if you're reading this I have to thank you for writing such a great novel! The only thing I have to say about it is the updates. I'm not pushing for updates because making such a masterpiece takes time but I wish I could read thousands of chapters.On a serious note, keep up the great work Author! And if you're wondering if you should read this you absolutely must do so.
Good story ☺️...............,..................................................................................................................
I like it, it has a cohesive plot for a smut story and good enough grammer, my only problem is that the plots can seem rushed at some points.
Another good story!The synopsis have a lot of contradiction, It makes you wonder which one will it be.I like how the character is, Reigan and Celine... I wonder how the development will be...Keep it up, author. I will wait for your chapters.