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I love how the MC thought he was alone, only to be bombarded with a snap back to reality pretty much. I really like how stories like that turn out with that premise and I know I'll enjoy this too with the more I read. The grammar needs some work, but I'm not gonna hold you too much to that.
They are true as their names:-
#Devil: but not an evil!
Embedded as a cold hearted devil but has a soft heart not to harm any innocent even after betrayal. Has his own fare share of guilt to burn himself in, but live for the people he cares and love but never shows.
#Our FL: as innocent as a bunny ? (but don't forget bunny bites if being teased ?). Who's character is still to be build and features to be shown. Naive, innocent but not a fool.
Side characters are lovable, you crave for their presence.. and laugh on a certain someone's mumbling enough to bring tears to eyes.
Now, curiosity is killing me how this novel is related to WAD (Witch's Daughter and the Devil's Son)
I was never in love with any character ever to write or comment about them as I do for devil(s) created by you.
i think that reading mtl will provide more translation consistency than this... seriously bad translation. every now and then you will get absolutely stupid sentences that make no sense...
Why is this locked at 15? Makes no sense since its suppose to be a free 19 chapters read....Webnovel trying to scam for more money then drop translations on novel like always GG.
It seem people on this site would swallow any trash qi throws at them
This novel is cliche and not as good as people say it is
I'm even suprised it managed to get n0 2 ranking
I'm very much enjoying this novel, the supporting characters are good, the bad guys are typical but still enjoyable, the only problem I have is sadly with the MC he is strong and ends up with all kinds of techniques, but he in my opinion is very much like a coward, he hides in the back all the time unless is very forced to do something or just complains he doesn't have the time and runs away, and after a certain point he just completely became complacent and stop upgrading his on strength, it really makes me sad cause otherwise it would be almost a 5/5 novel for me...
I cant quite put into words how it feels to read this as when i began it was pretty cringy for the first 100 or so chapters then it slowly left only to be replaced by randomness wether it be with the stalling of the plot or most importantly semmingly making the main character op for the first 250 chapter only the then be useless and i wont even attemt to try to understand the thinking behind the mc thoughts all in all i would not recommend this as theirs far better ones in the same genre and it just feels like the story was made to feel cringy and a bit of a mess in terms of how its structured
It's an alright novel, good idea but doesn't really stack up.
My main problems come during chap 29 - 30.
The "village" if you can call it that has the counsel house, bandit hideout, and 5 houses. If you read ANY kingdom-building novel then you understand at the start everyone pulls there weight to help build the foundation.
However, the Author ignores all this and is already trying to build the currency. This is by far the stupidest thing I've seen and has annoyed tf outta me. It's not even the worst part, he pays the military and bandits but then ignores the normal workers, the farmers etc how does this make sense?
Also, he then gives out all the food etc for free without putting a price on them. Doing this, why tf is he paying his people than when there is nothing to buy? You're literally just giving money away to someone who it will hold no value to. Instead of investing it to build up the foundations more and giving them better-living conditions.
Adding onto this he is not treating everyone equally by just paying the military witch will then lead to outrage. He then wonders how he is so fcking broke.
Another thing that is stupid is that the only way he can gain more of the money easily is to trade mystical items to the system which is explained as cornerstones of kingdoms, clans, empires.... No need for me to explain how stupid this is.
Finally, the last straw for me is when he traded his food supply for a tiny bit of money that he shouldn't have even lost in the first place. For a village that was wondering how they will survive for more than 13 days to then trade their food supply for money (which the villagers have), it just doesn't make sense to me... food is essential for tiny villages.
Adding onto this further any situation the mc finds himself in even if he himself from his own stupidity got him there is magically worked out by the system.
Other than these things it was a great novel with an interesting idea. I loved the idea of a magical kingdom in the desert hidden from all. Plus it was interesting what lay further in the desert and the enemies witch lay near. Just couldn't stand the stupidity that I mentioned before.
I really want to read this but it's too slow to me. I can't prepare myself to enjoy this..।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।।
Barely read 40 chapters, and I felt so sick.. every characters seems has no brain.. no logic applied here, not worth it. just wasting my time
so sad
gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood