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wooooooow Author! Honestly, I got intrigued by the synopsis... And when I read chapter one.. boom! Overflowing sadness.. You almost pulled my tears out of my eyes! Ghad. Hopefully, you'll update this Authooor! Keep up the good work! Fighting :)
steven's dad at it again
you eite yers old? go starte a biiznis, FAAILURE!
when i was eight years old i was already twenty five! ..........
This book is great and cool to read. Served a story about martial arts. Characters are very calm at all. Background of world this book very nice too.
The MC is very unlikable and immature. I mean, so much for being the "kings of dragons" or what not.
He is also very consistent. He killed himself because he lived long enough and there is no one to accompany him. He would have tried everything in his power then, to ensure that someone can stay with him. Like, what about trying to give immortality to his wife. Let's say that didn't work and he really tried everything, he would have been in despair. But then, after realizing his last option (death) didn't free him from suffering, he immediately bounced back. Okay...
Then about arrogance, I believe the reaction of this sentence by other commenter "I don't practice arrogance," said it best. "I smell lies!" It might be exceptional circumstance, but instead of showing more thought into handling the situation, MC resorted to violence. Sure, he apologized (and normally people would have go about their way), but his emotional intelligence is so low as to be do something else other than provoke the other guy. What is so painful about lowering your head a bit and humoring the other guy?
The the Sora Su...oh boi, she is a train wreck during her introduction. The first impression is struck up lady, willing to put her subordinates' lives on the line just to save a piece of treasure. Not a smart or gracious move. Then, her heel-face-turn when the MC showed his card.
And the MC? I thought I would get to see the strange morality of someone who had lived for so long. After witnessing so much atrocity, yet be powerless to stop them all, I would expect a more mature outlook. Like...had he been more self aware..."I know I can't save everyone, so I save only those I can see. Selfish, yes, but as long as it makes me happy not seeing people suffer, sure."
I would have been happy to see just this level of maturity and self-awareness.
I thought it will be like "Trafford's Trading Club" where the visitors/customers would have a significant turning point in their lives after entering the store BUT it became like "Internet cafe in another world" where they can improve their cultivation. Such a disappointment. I really thought that the MC will sell items that has cheats to create cliche MC or selling gift/talents etc or even souls/memories of higher cultivators WHICH can actually change fates... Sigh, what a disappointment.
Its pretty good story wise, but the writing style and grammatical errors are just huge deal breakers for me. Good luck author, but poor writing is poor writing.
How did it get to 45 chapters without getting picked????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Aye yo, I don't know about second blade king xhing cheng or zhong ding dung, but that boi over there looks like Kayn ngl....
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NOTHING IS CONFIRMED, SO AS TO SAY THIS IS JUST THE START. THEN WHY ARE THERE AN EMPEROR/SAGE CULTIVATION AT THE START ?
TOTAL SCORE ... 3.0
Isn’t this just a novel that died 2 months ago but you have to pay for it
I’m watching you
read 4 chapters and the grammar is extremely bad, can hardly understand anything that's happening because there are grammar mistakes literally everywhere, and yet he begs for golden tickets in the beggining, from the good reviews I've seen about flowing grammar and writing structure, I can tell he 1. deletes reviews or 2. writes his own reviews with different accounts, I cannot stress enough about how awful the grammar is, the story so far and how it's conveyed is great and character's feel like they have personality already... but the grammar ruins it all