Yet another good premise ruined by a trash author. The trash author just cant help himself from writing cliche, cringe trash and ruining the otherwise fine novel.Like, the cliche parts arent even necessary, but this incompetent Chinese idiot feels the need to add it.
most cring book I've ever read and not that much on this app but I've read a but load of books................................................
It rarely happens to me that I don't understand a book at all.Is this supposed to be comedy? A tragedy? A lesson?Maybe the jokes and recognizable quotes got lost in translation.I really would like to know what this book is supposed to be, what message it is trying to send.Can't even review this properly, Characters are stereotypes so far and MC is a non-entity.World Building is not there, normal World, all consequences of an Immortal just casually walking around are ignored.
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Good job by our dear mate. Keep writing , keep progressing. We are always there for you.Do more and more progress. Detailed things are here , easy to make films through details?. We need to find the secret to end the darkness of the world. Not only in the novel there is both good energy and dark energy which are around us . We need to identify them not for gaining power but to protect and improve the lives of everyone. Nice start by our dear mate. All the best to you.lots of love Dear Rajib.
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It's really awesome and I like Dragons .Man they are so cool.I also started writing a new novel "Flighters" . Am new and Don't know if it's good or not .please help me review it . I hope I can learn from you
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