The whole story is all about one dude cultivating and doing his best to stay alive in the cutthroat world of cultivators. He tries his best to cultivate, ignoring most other things in life other than cultivating, trying his best to not have enemies, and pretty much try to stay alive. Every realm he cultivates into he gains extra lifetime, but still not an immortal, so he has to cultivate more. And when he becomes immortal, the story ends. Rather cliffhanger type of ending, but I suppose it was expected since the title already describes the story.
Me encanta la historia, el diseño de los personajes es muy bueno como también la relación de los gemelos Potter, la escritura, el desarrollo y trama son interesantes y te dejan atrapado desde el primer capítulo.
This could easily be in the top 20 on this site if it had an editor. The plot is well formed, as far as I have read, and the characters are interesting. Still, English is obviously not the first language of the author. There are a significant amount of extremely common mistakes such as using the wrong words, getting plurals wrong, incorrect sentence structures, missing words, missing commas, run on sentences, incorrect tense, etc...It also doesn't help that the cover implies some sort of multiple personality story and synopsis doesn't really explain anything. Overall this is a good read assuming you can ignore the quality of the prose itself.
Well done. I have read a few stories that are inspired by games structures but this is the first that has a well-thought plot with a flow and suspense without relying too much on game characteristics. Keep writing and best of luck
This is basically the PG version of "I am a Scarecrow and the Demon Lord of Terror!"You'll like this if you prefer a 'lighter' take on monsters. If you like your non-human MCs to act like a human 90% of the time, and the remaining 10% monster.
Review is solely based on the free chapters. Who wouldn't want an opportunity to better their health and living conditions? I'm sure everyone wants to experience the whole rags to riches scenario. Seth, MC, doesn't really go from rags to riches, but goes from poor to middle class through his and his family's efforts. In a sense, the author does a great job at depicting how certain groups of people are treated and that is the sad reality. There are many who disregard those with a disability and it's sad. But aside from that, it seems like Seth gets better. Might continue reading to see his progress and I am curious as to what happens to their world because of the asteroids. Regardless of what I wrote, don't forget to test the waters yourself. There are 40 free chapters and that's more than enough to figure out if you like the story or not!
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OMG, I love this book. This is an excellent read. Please check this book out, guys. I love the characters and the plot as well as the development.
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It's a good book. you should try it. The life of a villain is described by the author. you should read this book. I guarantee that you will not disappointed.
OK now it´s official, the Story is f.... up ....random jumps, sometimes buy thing then don´t have them, charactors appears randomly (no story when joining)autor must be drunk or smoke all day..... rly.... good story potential but that crashed itLook ch 73: before Irene (Nun) wasn´t in the team, now she is it, Q: when did she join and how?!!!!!CH 68: buy Elementary swimming skill books 500.Intermediate swimming skill books 1000.-> CH 71 gets swimming skill book that he needs the most -.-