This is good. No, scratch that. This is great! I wont lie, ive always like a good detective story. what i got so far, shows a lot of promise. Im definitely adding this to my reading list.
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Great premise, with interesting characters. There are only a few chapters so can't give an accurate review. But reading the first 30 chapters, the plot looks promise. The romance is subtle and the pace is slow at first. The grammar could be improved, hopefully, the author updates more frequently. The power system is also very interesting, looking forward to how it unfolds. Maybe I will come back later and binge.
Cover is misleading? ?Synopsis doesn’t explain anything!?We already got a male main lead whose dad is missing ?Nothing to say but expectingthis to be comedy/fantasy/music with some transmigration/game element
Your book title is great, the plot is very strong, the Characters are well-organised, and your writing style is unique. waiting for the next chapters.
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I dunno how should I say this...the concept of your story is really something new that I've read.I've read upto chapter 6 so far. The story is great...u've given a decent info about the world background and cultivation too in a sense I guess but it just seems kinda bland to me I don't know why! The mentality of MC seems kinda weird to me (in my opinion atleast) one moment he is feeling betrayed and tries to deny the whole thing and in the next he is determined to be the best all of a sudden, and it's not bad but it did feel strange.All in all its a good story with potential I think, u have good chapter length and great grammar. So keep up the good work man. Cheers!
quite entertaining story...........................................................................................................................
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
Non-human MC lovers incoming.godasdasdohgdjthcvhsuetryhrtdfucrtyhertthckuehghfygkrtherthghdithrthyrticghhrthrttckrthtjhrthfkhertjtrjdg
don't get your hopes up the first chapter is clickbait. waste of time. clowns????????????????????????????????????