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I'm really enjoying it, I'm curious to see how the world will develop. Mc's development is pretty cool, when I started because of the synopsis I was afraid he would turn into a boring nut, I'm glad it didn't happen,
Dark Fantasy Content . . . CheckMurderously Ruthless MC . . . CheckQuirky Characters . . . CheckI think we got plenty of what we need here for a great story.
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Hope everyone enjoys the book.
it's finally got here omgg!!!!............
Everyone should read this!It's horror novel but not just particularly make you goosebumps but also feel some sweetness from it. You can still feel the gloomy feeling but not make you scared silly.I already read few from the raw and Overall it's good novel./// Here some slight SPOLER ///Well, the downside is (in my opinion until 60 chapters++) the other characters besides MC are girls (girl, lady, woman, mother, aunt, daughter). There are boys in there, but it's just side characters (like really side characters that not significantly important).Here the example (Girl)1. His sister and mother2. His ex-crush a.k.a his classmate3. School beauty4. The police Inspector (that of course a woman)5. Another girl classmate (sit beside him in class)6. President counsil (both now and former)7. His class monitor8. Forensic doctor 9. Mother and daughter 10. High school girl11. Someone meet in the train12. Girl spirits Here the boys1. His father 2. Insignificant School bullies3. Man Murderer4. Some (2) fake paranormal activist5. Some insignificant police bodyguards
New author who could use a little bit of work on his English at times, but that being said it's better than 99% of the stuff on this site already! The majority of the time the author follows a logical progression, and shows the motivations for the characters actions in a way that makes sense and is engaging.I think this author has a lot of potential, and if he had a professional editor on hand this novel would be almost publishable!Keep on writing, keep on practicing, keep on doing your thing!As a piece of advice, you might want to start distancing yourself from readers comments. As your novel gets more and more popular you will eventually attract some trolls, and some very loud negative voices from idiots who don't know what a proper story is, and couldn't write one to save their lives. Make sure not to let them discourage you!
When you say Ranger. Is that the title they are given the players or is it what the main character is going to be? I am just confused which is why i am asking this question.
The synopsis caught my interest and I can't stop reading after the first chapter with this badass MC. The story flowed well and the amazing translation quality piques my curiosity too.Thanks for translating this wonderful novel~ :D
I have to review this. Whatever i thought about this novel before reading it turned out to be a hoax. I thought this is a lame chinese ero novel and i was gonna skip it. I read review and thought to give it a try. I overestimated the story and in the end i ended up underestimating it. DO NOT GO BY NAME AND COVER OF THE NOVEL. Till the latest chapter i.e. 73 there is so solid r-18 scene,harem or any dual cultivation.This novel has a solid world setting which is disclosed bit by bit. Writing quality is also pretty good along with stable updates. The two main characters are interesting with decent personalities though such persona are commonly found in many novels. Some might not like the duo to be OP but i like OP protags so no problem there. They are OP due to their bloodline(plot armor duhhh) and for all the power ups and fast cultivation there's a proper reason. Even though they are OP they face immense problems when fighting truly powerful enemies, almost losing life. Plot armor isnt heavy so even that is good. Other characters are also decently fleshed out but again they are commonly found in many novels so idk how others will feel about it.I will tell the story in short here. MC and FML are part of an organisation as lab rats. They do diff types of experiments on all those that were caught by organisation.MC and FML have better conditions than rest coz they are special. One day one such experiment goes wrong and the duo are teleported along with some doctor/scientists. Now the duo are teleported in same area(forest) where they are taken as servants. They cleverly make their way out of it(killing some people) and make their way to city while increasing their power/cultivation. They get themselves admitted to an academy, do some face slapping, adventure in ancient labyrinth and other such events have happened till now. Though sounds common to all novels out there but i found the story pretty interesting and engaging, the way it is written. It is worth a shot instead of wasting other bs novels on this website or any other popcorn novel.( Everything is my personal opinion so it is not necessary that everyone will like it. Still give it a try and read few chapters) I hope author keeps writing with same momentum.....
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Well I can't really do much of a review based on the description but I hope this book doesn't become the typical CN novel we usually get.................................. ?
