Cool read. Great worldbuilding elements going on. The concept and the fantasy like elements blend nicely with the cultural aspects of the novel. In addition, the characters names and overall profile matches the culture presented here. I myself am trying to get used to novels with characters that have Eastern names, but that doesn't affect the overall reading experience. Rather, I'm impressed with the overall writing the author has. Hopefully the author can finish the novel because I am intrigued how it will all end.
I want to start this review by saying I quite like it from what I've read so far.It is quite original and the world background is very interesting.Some negative points however are the writing quality, and the narration.While I do think that the writing quality isn't particularly bad I find that there's a lot of grammar mistakes and the expressions used could be improved quite a lot. As for the narration sometimes its simply dry and doesn't convey any meaning, or can get confusing with too much information at once when the sentences aren't structured well.Thanks author I really liked reading your ideas.
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